[fanfic] When we were children (JaeMin "Unseen Beauty" verse - Part 2)

[dongbangsuju20]

Title: When we were children (JaeMin "Unseen Beauty" verse - Part 2)

Pairing: JaeMin

Genre: AU. fluff. sad.

Rating: PG

Words: 878

Warning: none

Summary: When they first met, Changmin was dazzled by his smile.

Thanks to: my beta engbreakfast

Disclaimer: Don't own DBSK.

A/N:The second part of this verse

Comments

[gurohideki]

Joongie is so precious and endearing and just a pinnacle for hope. Changmin's so sincere and considerate and thoughtful. I might just die from how wonderful and bittersweet and wow this series is.

[dongbangsuju20]

haha, yeah, kinda~
I never know if I write them okay since I am not that familiar with jaemin, still
but I hope you like how I write them~

aww, thank you <33
don't die XDD
*hugs*
thank you very much for the reading and comment ^-^

[pawshingo]

KIds are pure, innocent and sincere! Poor Min! he just wants to help and be friends with Jaejoong! Will you be adding a bit more to this?

[dongbangsuju20]

I love to write kids stories tbh XD
although I don't really know if I can~ write them XD'''' haha

yes, of course ^^
I already have something in mind~
I think I will update this series soon, I like it and it flows rather easy out my fingers XD

thank you for the cmment <3

[haizul]

you're actually continuing this. i'm so happy ;~; ♥

gosh changmin is such a sweetie! and jae.. is just lovely :D

i'll be looking forward to the other parts! ^^

[dongbangsuju20]

haha, I am beginning to love you for reading and commenting my fics ;^;
*hugs*
thank you <33
and yeah, it flows quite easy.. XD i have so many other longer fics unfinished laying here around but I think this one will go more easily ^^

hihi, riight?! lil kids are always lovely and cute ;^;

thank you <3333
i am glad you like it~

[haizul]

;~; and I love YOU for writing jaemin!!! -hugs back- ♥
oh yay! then i can look forward to more installations for this \8DD/
wheee i support you! you can do it! o^^o

[dongbangsuju20]

I feel so honored that you like my jaemin fics ;^;
*clings*
yeah, you can haha XDD
hope you will like them~

aw, you already support me sooo much with your comments ♥
thank you so much~

[wordlesslove]

awww! this is so sweet!

this is so cute~ changminnie is so eager to meet a new friend (and probably for the challenge of learning something people think will be hard for him). i love how intensely changmin watches jaejoong, like he's trying to soak up as much of him as he can before he actually meets him. it sounds like the real life changmin, very observant.

you say you don't write jaemin, but even without writing the actual jaemin interaction, you are really good (if you hadn't've mentioned it i wouldn't have known^^).

i'm off to read the next part (sorry for the late comment) see you in a bit!

[dongbangsuju20]

i love your long and detailed comments <3
they help me to know how to improve and what you like ^-^ thank you~

and omg, I feel so flattered that you actually recognize the real changmin in my changmin in this fic ;^;
thank you <3

thaaaank you ♥
*flattered* <333

haha, no problem ^^
every comment is precious to me, even if it comes late ^-^
thank you for reading and the comment! <3