[fic] Forward the Machine (AT, Action/Adventure) - Chapter 6 - Part II

[cryogenia]

Eckart lead him back along the corridor several paces, much faster than Dr. Kessler had. Alfons kept up gamely, though he could feel himself starting to wheeze. His lungs were like a pair of billows in his chest, fanning the flames that were searing him with each additional inflation.

“I’ve heard a lot about you,” the director said in a

Comments

[semipertinent]

Nothing wrong with technobabble, especially when you sneak explainations in there. <3

[semipertinent]

And yes, I fail at posting DX.

[cryogenia]

XD Well, just let me know if I ever fail at explanations XD It's been a long time since I had to deal with either chemistry or physics on a daily basis :)

[ankoku_tenshi]

I love all this backstory information. And technobabble. :D

I really think it's interesting how Alfons is drawing upon Edward for inspiration, it's a little new, I think. I have seen other fics where it happens, but usually only in terms of thinking in Ed's shoes, but in this one, Alfons is sort of using Ed as an anchor.

late comment is very late

[ketita]

uni is a bitch and I have very little online time these past few days - but I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading it, and I love hte quick updates, and I LOVE what you did with Alfons <3<3<3
and Alfons doing alchemy! ....I'm still dying to know where Ed is, though.

[dreamer1789]

XD XD XD It's all there: the background detail, the style, the historical reference bits (and Alfons' reaction to meeting with the director - a woman?! ^^). I was ridiculously happy over the Alfons working alchemy part. Just too awesome for words! (I swear you've made my day - must stop grinning like a lunatic.)