[fic] "CSI: Amestris" (Detective AU) - Chapter 1, Part II

[cryogenia]

Title: CSI: Amestris
Genre: AU
Rating: R
Summary: Originally written for this prompt on the FMA Kinkmeme. Detectives Roy Mustang and Maes Hughes are caught up in a web of intrigue and murder as a series of brutal murders rocks Central city to its core. Along with their informant Edward Elric, a brilliant but troubled young man, their investigation

Comments

[dragonimp]

Woah! It's even more intense than before! Can't wait for more of this.

[cryogenia]

Thanks! Glad you liked the edits :)

[oh_so_blase]

Ohmygod this is good!!!!!
I can't think of anything else to say other than !!!!!!!!! And *FLAILS* and please please please update soon.

[cryogenia]

Thanks! I am glad you like it :)

[blackmarquise]

wow, that's really something.

Wowowowowowowow, *my brain is still recovering from this awesomness.

Jesus, the interraction between Ed and Roy was so wonderful(ly in character too!).
and Ling is already in the place!!!
I'm look forward to the next chapter (badly!!!)

[cryogenia]

Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying it :)

[ataraxistence]

Oh goodness, this is awesome, absolutely awesome! I love how you've managed to take their personalities and transplant it into a brilliant and detailed setting with an absolutely intriguing premise. ♥

I am looking forward to more. ;DDD Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. ♥

[ankoku_tenshi]

You, are a veritable genius. :D I like the fact that you started out with Mustang's POV rather than just third-person since it gives the reader a more intimate look on things.I also think your interpretation on Ed was really interesting (DIY electricity and backyard illegal chemist FTW); you actually made him sink to the 'low', which is something that I think a lot of fanfic authors don't do.

And Ling! Linglinglinglingling. *_* This is definitely shaping to be an interesting ride.