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cryoutmyname

OOC Critic post

Mar 12, 2029 00:42

Don't like how I'm playing Zidane? Got some concrit you'd like to share? Or maybe a compliment! Either way, you can drop a line here.

Anon is on, IP is off.

critic post, ooc

Comments 4

anonymous April 5 2009, 04:50:22 UTC

This is a nitpicky as hell point, and something I didn't notice until it was pointed out to me, but Lindblumians (and Zidane specifically) really do say 'geez' a lot. You might want to work that interjection into your dialogue every so often?

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Yeah, I know. Sorry. I'll leave you my personal favorite Zidane-themed pick-up line; "My tail wasn't the only part of my body which perked up when I saw you!"

cryoutmyname April 6 2009, 01:03:44 UTC

No no no it's totally fine! It gives me something to inject into his words!

Thank you!

LOL BEST PICKUP LINE EVER. He's so bad.

anonymous April 6 2009, 03:22:24 UTC

Phew. I was afraid that I'd come across as an anal-retentive anon, the sort who'd sneer at the yeah-to-c'mon ratio or something. I didn't notice it myself until someone pointed it out, like I said...then I loaded up a script and hot damn did they abuse that word in Lindblum.

Glad I could help!

There's also, "You know how much the Iifa Tree weighs? Enough to break the ice. I'm Zidane, and you are...?"

cryoutmyname April 9 2009, 07:36:21 UTC

No not at all! Hahhaha it's funny that you noticed it though, and remembered enough to offer as concrit :3 TOTALLY COOL

Oh I like that one!