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crysalice_bell

Fusion Hearts [Chapter 6: The Price of a Wish]

Jul 19, 2010 23:27

Almost a whole month! It had been a very hectic month, but I managed to update.

This chapter of Fusion Hearts is one of my longest yet, and it contains one of the major events of the whole story.

So I guess it's worth the wait?

( A Major Plot Event! )

fusion hearts, fanfiction, yu-gi-oh gx

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crysalice_bell July 21 2010, 12:36:15 UTC

Eh, thank you very much, I'm really honored! :D I've seen the entry on your journal too. I know I still have a long way to go when it comes to my writing, and I can still improve, but knowing how much you support the story makes me grin like an idiot in front of my laptop.

Writing AU can sometimes be harder than canon, especially when I'm lost on how a character is supposed to react on the situation that is still in-character for them. Putting the emotions into words can be a challenge as well (especially in this chapter). I needed to write their emotions while still maintaining the "mystery" atmosphere (in other words, not giving too much of the plot away ;) Hehe...)

I was beginning to think that nobody was visiting this LJ xD

Whether I try to be 'cool' about it or not, reading reviews, especially yours that say "one of THE BEST" makes me smile so much and makes me want to write, like right now :D although I must restrain myself because I have to review for an exam Hahaha...

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crysalice_bell July 29 2010, 10:23:05 UTC

No worries. :) We all have our busy times. Good luck in your events!

Thanks, and I'll try my best. Don't worry too much about reviewing, take as much time to prepare for it as you would like (even if it would take the last chapter, IF I ever get there xD)

Hi! bloodcat0502 August 2 2010, 02:00:47 UTC

Hello Rine-Line, I hope that you can recognize me! Today I decided to break my laziness and friend you on LJ. I really like your fics, they always have original ideas and you are able to put a lot of thoughts and emotions into it. This fic really is a great AU, although the story is still in the build-up stage and haven't come to the real fights yet.

I feel sorry for you after all the troubles you were in. How have you been recently?

crysalice_bell August 2 2010, 11:11:32 UTC

(Hee, I checked your journal and boy, was I surprised! :D)

Hey, BloodyKitty-chan! Thanks for taking the time to do so.

Hee, thanks a lot, I try really hard. It's not easy making an 'original' idea, it's always bound to be based after some already existing plot. As for thoughts and emotions... Sometimes, unintentional or not, I end up putting my own experiences when I write emotional parts of a chapter.

Yeah, we're not halfway through FH yet so stay tuned. There'll be more trouble and more epic fights to come! 8D Oh and also, more romance <3

Oh, do not worry, I am fine now. I've sorted everything out. That subject would have to wait next year so I only worry about lessons now. And I am able to squeeze in more writing time now for Chapter 7. Sorry for worrying. Ehehe...