fic: Control (1/?)

[crystal_marbles]

Title: Control
Fandom: Glee
Rating:  R
Characters: Kurt, Burt & Mama Hummel (This chapter)
Pairings: Eventual Puck/Kurt, Kurt/OC
Warnings: Mental illness(ED's), emotional abuse, death/illness 
Word count: 1063
Summary: Anorexia is not a disease. Anorexia is not a game. Anorexia is a skill, perfected only by a few. The chosen, the pure, the flawless.

Comments

[sony_kit82]

and that is such a dark foreshadowing. I love how Kurt approached the situation - there's something about the clinical and almost devoid-of-emotion tone that just screams lost. This is such a sensitive topic for some people that I commend you for tackling it, especially with how the eating disorder starts for Kurt's case. looking forward to more. :)

[crystal_marbles]

I'm glad you like it. ;P

[crystal_marbles]

It might take a while, but Puck will definitely have a part in the story. ;P I'm glad you liked it. =)

[haolover9312]

This is definitely an interesting plot and I can't wait to see how Kurt deals with his developing eating disorder. Great work!

[crystal_marbles]

Thank you! =)

[emo_chick_87]

I love that this gives a deeper pathos behind his disorder. It is really cliche to make the skinny gay boy body obsessed. I really love that you went a different way. I'm looking forward to the next part.

[crystal_marbles]

I wanted to show that people can develop eating disorders from all kinds of things, and not only superficial reasons, so I'm glad that you liked it.

Thanks for commenting! =)

[firithnovwen]

Very good, I look forward to updates

[crystal_marbles]

Thank you =)