Fic:The Road of Destiny (3/?)

[crystal_mk]

Title: The Road of Destiny (3/?)
Author: crystal_mk
Pairing: Matt/Mohinder
Rating: R for this part, I think, NC-17 for the whole thing.
Summary: Destiny writes the road but do we get to choose whether or not to follow
Disclaimer: I spent all my money on hospital bills and crappy cold medication so no, I don’t own them

We phoned Bennet after Molly had

Comments

[00smut]

Poor Molly, she's going to need so much therapy as an adult. The tension here is palpable, and anything with Bennet involved is sketchy. You write relationships, the real gritty human part as well. Hope you post more soon!

[crystal_mk]

I know, the poor girl. But who can really blame her.

Bennet's a sketchy kind of guy, you can never completely trust him.
Thanks! I'm trying to make the relationships seem real and not contrived so I'm glad it's working.

Thanks for reading!

[carmexgirl]

Oh I'm so confused. Should they help Bennet? Shouldn't they?? You're writing this so well, I'm like the characters - I don't know where to turn! You're going to have to write something that makes it clear to me, do you hear!

Loving this!

[crystal_mk]

Confusion is great, confusion is what I'm going for. I have every intention of clearing everything up, I'm just not sure when.

Thanks for reading!

[hanuueshe]

Eep! Confusion! Tension! Ambiguity! Passion! Anxeity!

MORE!!!!!

[crystal_mk]

Wooohooo for emotional rollercoasters!

Thanks for reading!

[me_likee]

You've really inhabited Mohinder's character. I love all the insights into his thoughts, his fears. It's amazing to experience the world through him. It made everything immediate for me, and it intensified the all his emotions and mine.

[crystal_mk]

I've inhabited Mohinder...*snort*, that's kinky.

Moving on, I'm glad I'm getting his character right. As difficult as it is to believe, no, I'm not Mohinder so I work hard at getting his voice right so I'm really happy to know I'm pulling it off.

Wonderful! Im glad you're connecting to him cause' there really wouldn't be a point to writing this if you weren't.

Thanks for reading!

[me_likee]

LOL!! Way to pervert it! There's no way I am going to use or hear that word again without giggling.

[crystal_mk]

Ahhh, just one of the many wonderful things I bring to any relationship. You know you like it, don't deny it. ;D

[boudecia7]

I love the relationship between Matt and Mohinder in this part; they're so warm and protective of each other and Molly. Very nice! Looking forward to see what happens next.

[crystal_mk]

I love their relationship, period. Unfortunately, they're gonna need that warm and protective relationship in future parts...just to warn you.

Thanks for reading!