And so maybe I'm bad with criticism, and my heart gets broken easy...

[crystalparadox]

The crumbling of the pieces fall down to the ground. Not knowing what to do next they are swept all around. Under the rug is the place where things go, that have now dug a hole and flown out of my sorrowful head. Everything has been placed on a simple gameboard, this is where anyone can take the next move. Thrown around left through right,

Comments

[naked_penguin]

I cried

[spiral_manda]

That's beautiful Sands.. The part I like the most is "I think I would walk until forever just to stay apart of you". I read it wrong the first time, thinking that you said "I think I would walk until forever just to stay apart from you". It's pretty much harsh the second way (the wrong way), but I still really like it.. can I use it for a poem/quote/lyric?