Ugh!

[cschoolgirl]

Well, last week sucked. I'm hoping that the coming week doesn't suck as badly. I need to go bake cookies! That will fix everything. Although it won't get Pip's Black Belt paper typed

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[roguelotus]

12 stories--that's one heck of a goal (she says in awe). My only goal was to start writing, period. Check--finally! :)

What about this for your description:

The future is always shifting. One small change can lead to a completely different outcome. One moment, a thousand different possibilities...

I think if the story is categorized as DOFP, there's enough info there to entice the reader.

I can't wait to read all the possibilities that you came up with!

[cschoolgirl]

Most of my stories only range around 1000 words, it's getting them through the beta process that is going to be my issue this year.

Great description. I should hire you. I'll pay you in paleo chocolate chip cookies, fresh out of the oven. 😄

[roguelotus]

That sounds delicious! I'll work for food! :)