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Standing Still 17/?

Mar 16, 2011 22:57

Title: Standing Still (17/?)
Author: CSIGeekFan
Rating: R (Language)
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: It's been five years since that fateful day that he walked away from Oakdale. Five years since he had his heart ripped to shreds. Five years since the ultimate betrayal.

A/N: Thanks to everyone who's been following this story. The comments have been ( Read more... )

luke, lure, reid, fanfic

Comments 15

rtruffles March 17 2011, 16:25:57 UTC

This story gets me every time!!

I loved the scene between Katie and Lanie. It was so great to hear Katie say that she loved Reid. (The show seemed to forget that at the end!)

I loved the ending!

csigeekfan March 18 2011, 00:02:29 UTC

The show forgot a LOT at the end - including how many LuRe fans are out there.

jem_018 March 17 2011, 16:50:09 UTC

I loved the part with Lanie and Katie. It made me a little teary eyed.

Loved the end part too.

great chapter. :D

csigeekfan March 18 2011, 00:03:03 UTC

Oh, I'm glad. I hadn't intended it to make anyone teary-eyed, but I'm glad it did. :)

rlb_16 March 17 2011, 21:05:59 UTC

I really loved it when Lanie told Ash that she loved him. He needs
to know that he is loved by so many people. As always, this story continues to be wonderful.

csigeekfan March 18 2011, 00:04:13 UTC

Thank you so much. I felt this need to start showing Ash just how much he's loved.

bluemagicrose March 17 2011, 21:12:56 UTC

How do you make every chapter so great? And cry-worthy? I always end up with tears in my eyes.

Luke hasn't seen/talk to Katie yet, right? Is she planning on going to Thanksgiving at the Snyders? And does that mean Jacob and Chris will be there?

csigeekfan March 18 2011, 00:05:41 UTC

Oh wow. Thank you so much. I'm glad it's drawing out emotions so well, and I really am happy you're enjoying this.

As for Thanksgiving.... that's the next chapter.

joann414 March 17 2011, 22:02:22 UTC

I am so curious about this story. This chapter was so sad, but great. Lanie and Katie almost made me cry, but Luke and Lanie's hug at the end DID make me cry. Hope so much there is a happy ending on the horizon.

csigeekfan March 18 2011, 00:09:40 UTC

Thank you so much. I am glad you're finding this story worth reading. I've enjoyed writing it, although I'll admit to getting myself stuck once or twice.

And in reality, I think Lanie really would get along well with Katie.