Missing Scene - Stargateland challenge

[csiguci]

Title: June 30, 27 (Novus)/2038 (on Earth)
Length: 680 words
Rating: G
Episode: SGU - Epilogue
Scene: Chloe’s diary entry on the day of Young’s funeral [and kudos to any director who can make a visual sequence out of this all. I am afraid, guys, that in an attempt to write Chloe’s diary entry I wrote Young's obituary and in a terribly cheesy

Comments

[ashimon]

Damn. I could not resist reading this. When I got to Matt hates fishing to this day I just came down with the biggest roar of laughter. (I would have laughed harder only if it turned out Young hated fishing just as much). Oh, and fun to see Crazy Forest's debut! ;)

[shena8]

The Rabbbit, The Snail and The Kitty... I think I've read this. Those three all love a certain Curlyhead to death! Love those Crazy Forest stories. And this was really very sweet, and very much in Chloe's character. The fact that she sat with him as he passed speaks how much she cared for him. I sure wish they hadn't cut the scene of Young doing the laundry at daybreak...

[ashimon]

Ah, you almost got that Crazy Forest part right. I mean the alter egos. Except. Kitty is in fact a lion (not a lioness) and is the heir apparent to the throne of Crazy Forest. As a matter of fact he has recently acceded to the throne. :) I think I keep silent on the rest of the story just in case Sarah wants to tell it herself at a later point. :D

[shena8]

A PLOT BUNNY!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^runs screaming into the... umm... afternoon...^

[ashimon]

Well, I am afraid that bunny landed in csiguci's laps. :)

[kimmy4eytj]

I'm afraid I don't know the story of the Crazy Forest. This is a wonderful scene. I love the sense of community that it brings, everyone pitching in to help one another just like he stated in his speech in Common Descent. My heart breaks for Young at TJ's death. Seeing him pour his love into his kids through Chloe's eyes is brilliant. Excellent work, Csiguci.

[ashimon]

As a matter of fact Crazy Forest is a long running joke/story of the twins that made its first public appearance here. We kind of regret we never wrote it up as a children's book, but it seems we don't have the time.

[shena8]

For something utterly brilliant like that you have to MAKE time.

By special orders from Colonel Young himself!!!

[csiguci]

oh, thank you. *blushing* it was so much fun to write this. i kept imagining what Young thought or how he might have responded to all this 'help'.

[elaiel]

Wow, I loved this :D

[csiguci]

Thank you. :)

[mgsmurf]

What a lovely telling of who Young the man was on Novus, as a husband, friend and father. Well done.

[csiguci]

Thank you. *waves to smurf*