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ct_hol

Accidentally Perfect

Nov 18, 2009 08:25

Autumn of 1999I am giddy with excitement ( Read more... )

just for fun

Comments 6

Part One toxic_apiaceae November 28 2009, 01:49:59 UTC

Hello! I’m Tox, one of your editors this week ( ... )

Part Two toxic_apiaceae November 28 2009, 02:02:32 UTC

[It was with impatience as it usually was. She was drunk again and was living in the shelter as she had squandered all her money on drink and drugs. She has a lot of money coming from a safe secure home, raised by loving parents, yet she traded it all for that ( ... )

Thank you! ct_hol November 28 2009, 10:20:10 UTC

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and giving me such useful,constructive criticism.

desert_rose December 5 2009, 07:38:25 UTC

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Thanks you ct_hol December 5 2009, 16:08:34 UTC

Hi

Thank you very much for the great feedback and I am glad you enjoyed the piece.

pelethetart December 8 2009, 19:06:12 UTC

Hi!

Sorry it took me so long to comment to this. Lots of back reading it seems! lol

I like how this reads as if it could be anyone that we know in day to day life. It's very "real" for lack of a better word.

I also like how the mom seems to redeem herself in the end.

While not seeming so at first, it ends up being a very sweet story.

Thank you for sharing!