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May 02, 2005 15:27

Inevity ( Read more... )

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sundaygray May 5 2005, 22:15:26 UTC
who wrote this?!

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cubacrazejim May 5 2005, 23:11:36 UTC
yeah, crap, ain't it?

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cubacrazejim May 5 2005, 23:12:10 UTC
wait'll you catch up on the next post

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cubacrazejim May 6 2005, 15:03:58 UTC
Once whole, functional, despite the daily ash you took from so many smokers,
emptied morning lungs, too-familar biergarten scent.
despite baths and scaldings, tumbling drunken through another set of hands,
that couldn't keep you, then inevitable gravity, linoleum scarred.

Does that work better? Blah. The whole thing recalls this day I was sitting there, and this ashtray just shattered, it didn't fall, just sitting there.

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