Command

Apr 22, 2012 19:50

Title: Command
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Sub!John/dom!Sherlock
Warnings: Consensual hypnosis kink, lots and lots of mind control, D/s, mild humiliation kink. The hypnosis is probably totally unrealistic, BTW. I don't know much about hypnosis, so maybe it is realistic?
Summary: This PWP is very much inspired by the excellent Under ControlRead more... )

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rotaryphones April 23 2012, 12:42:40 UTC
Holy fucking fuck. Hold on a second, let me pull myself up out of this puddle I just melted into, because I'm trying not to resort to keyboard smashing...

No, seriously. I should be telling you how flattered I am that you enjoyed my 'verse enough to write in it, and how well written it is at that, but all I can think to say is how freaking hot this is. Guh. Just...that first text...and John writhing on the ground, knowing perfectly well what's going on...and Sherlock showing up all calm and collected and teasing...oh my god, I love it. I love all of it.

These two are exactly how I imagined them, too. I love the little things that affect John, like knowing Sherlock can lie, and not trusting his own free will, and seeking out Sherlock's condescending praise. And then Sherlock is so ultra composed and amused by the whole thing, but he's also so obviously invested in John and giving him what he wants. And that's the other part of it that leaves me melted: it's so romantic by the end, with Sherlock doing his own version of aftercare and ( ... )

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cuddles_and_jam April 25 2012, 02:13:50 UTC
Wow, I'm so happy that you like this! Before I posted this I went back and reread your fics (which are, jsyk, extremely hot) and remembered how fully fleshed out your hypno 'verse is. So I felt almost as nervous as this version of Sherlock about whether I was getting it right. Anyway, thank you so much for your comment and the rec. I hope you get all the hypnosis fic you deserve! ♥

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pennswoods April 23 2012, 14:11:31 UTC
Here via rotaryphone's rec. God this was hot. And that's about as eloquent as I'm going to be right now. You stole all the words.

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cuddles_and_jam April 25 2012, 02:18:57 UTC
:) Thank you for reading!

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airynothing April 23 2012, 14:21:42 UTC
Eeeeeeeexcellent.

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cuddles_and_jam April 25 2012, 02:19:10 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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anonymous May 1 2012, 22:14:49 UTC
Here via a general author rec on the rant meme - wow. wow. Oh wow. I'm going to back away slowly and head for the bunk - you continue your great, great work.

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cuddles_and_jam May 7 2012, 01:29:27 UTC
:D Thank you so much!

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paperclipsnglue May 15 2012, 13:53:40 UTC
Excuse me, I need a freezing cold shower before work. Wonderful. xx

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cuddles_and_jam May 16 2012, 03:31:19 UTC
;) Thank you!

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