Bold and Young (for prompt 54)

Oct 07, 2015 13:59

Prompt: #54
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals

Title: Bold and Young
Rating: NC-17
Other pairings involved: Chen/Xiumin, Baekhyun/Kyungsoo
Length: 13,091 words
Summary: Joonmyun is a quiet, unassuming piano teacher who has a one night stand with a handsome, pink haired boy he meets at a club.

Warnings: Do I need to warn for classical music and ( Read more... )

2015: submissions, rating: nc-17

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jongjongmyeon October 8 2015, 05:36:06 UTC
Mah spot! Be righr back after school ;)

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jongjongmyeon October 10 2015, 02:48:42 UTC
'EM BACK!

So I really really love this fic it's written seamlessly and properly. I've always known sukai to have one of the best writers and I never get disappointed. Although my main ship is hunho, sukai has a very special place in my heart. I love pink-haired jongin and blonde junmyeon and I love imagining them together like that.

You created an AU that really fits their characters and didn't make them as OOC as they can sometimes be in normal AU fics. I'm so in love. Please make some more! Plus, I know who you are! *giggles*

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lotusk October 13 2015, 06:36:45 UTC
First of all, thank you for coming back! So many people spot and then vanish forever but you not only came back you wrote me such a lovely comment so THANK YOU. I was so intrigued by the "I know who you are!" Lol

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misszhangyixing October 8 2015, 15:44:12 UTC
I am so in love. This fic is wonderful. I love the scenes at the club because the build up was was just right. Pink haired Jongin (who also has a tattoo!!!) who usually ignores everyone is suddenly interested in boring piano teacher Joonmyun, them staging that kiss and them frotting while Joonmyun is trying to teach Jongin how to play the piano and I'm just O_O that has got to be one of the most erotic things i have ever read and ughh so hot!! Also, I really liked Jongin's character here, he's so gentle and caring and just so precious and sweet to Joonmyun and him writing that note, gahhhhhh the feels. I love everything about this, this is really beautiful.

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lotusk October 13 2015, 06:37:59 UTC
Thank you, as always, Isabel for being one of the most gracious and generous readers around. It always makes me so happy when I see you've left something on one of my fics /hugs

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bianca747 October 8 2015, 20:35:55 UTC
This was sooooo good. Pink haired Jongin with a tattoo and piercings and boring piano teacher Joonmyun seem like an odd couple but they work. I'm glad both of them decided to give each other a chance at the club and do something unusual. The build-up and the actual scene of the two of them frotting on the piano bench was so hot. It was some of the best smut I've read in a while. The two of them pining after each other and then so randomly finding each other gave me a lot of feels. This was a pleasure to read. Thank you! <3

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lotusk October 13 2015, 06:43:24 UTC
There's something about SuKai pining for each other - I have such a soft spot for this ;-; thank you for reading and commenting!

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snapbaeks October 9 2015, 00:58:45 UTC
I'M YELLING VERY LOUDLY RIGHT NOW. YOU CAN PROBABLY HEAR ME THAT'S HOW LOUDLY I AM YELLING.

I'm so glad you chose to make this nini pink nini because i have so much love for pink nini.

i loved e v e r y t h i n g about their first night together. the excitement of just letting yourself go and following where the night takes you was so well conveyed, like i felt myself nervous and excited right alongside junmyeon. and then when they finally got to junmyeon's apartment and they were both nervous and not quite sure what to do cuz they don't normally go home with strangers. i ;ajkdf;dljk loved that so much ( ... )

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lotusk October 13 2015, 06:49:43 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL COMMENT!!! /rolls all over you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it ♡

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caterplina October 9 2015, 20:40:01 UTC
I was going like "oh wow! this is so hot! i like this! sexy jongin is a yes!" and suddenly, you hit me with these fluffy feels!! why?? why do you give me this much fluff for the ending. I'm not ok :( :( it was too good!! hahaha
I really liked it. ^^

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lotusk October 13 2015, 06:50:52 UTC
I'm awful, I can't seem to stop writing fluff! Someone needs to stop meeeee

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caterplina October 14 2015, 03:10:08 UTC
(no, please, keep going. give us more fluffy smut or smutty fluff)

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lotusk October 14 2015, 03:18:38 UTC
It seems I'm incapable of writing smut that isn't fluffy LOL. Except maybe for shades of pale ^^

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