Poor Little Rich Boys (for prompt 142)

[cuddlybros]

Prompt: #142
Author: ANONYMOUS until reveals

Title: Poor Little Rich Boys
Rating: NC-17
Length: 6,000+ words
Summary: Money, Youth, and Looks. Three things that Jongin and Kai both have in abundance. What they don’t have, however, is Kim Joonmyeon.

Warnings: Adult language/situations
Notes: I just want to say thanks to the person who gave prompt

Comments

[amlika]

Wow you have a great writing style. The dialogues are so natural, like talking to a bunch of spoiled but witty friends lol. And the way you describe everything is very entertaining but easy to follow. Can't wait for reveal so I can read up more of your writing <3
This story is fun and sarcastic, it would be very interesting to see where you go with the plotline :)

[good4_onething]

Thanks so much for the kind words *throws hearts*
I'm so happy that ur interested in my stuff. Look me up on asianfanfics (himinnasan) for my other fics - I don't really post anything on LJ :)

[amaxingbaek]

SCREAMS THIS IS MY PROMPT! I honestly didn’t think anyone was going to claim this but thank you for doing so. AND NOT ONLY THAT but there’s going to be more ;; I just might combust from the feels, but I need to read this first and foremost so here we go~

Kai had had to hide his face in Jongin’s moth-eaten grey sweater so his grin wouldn’t show on screen.
SWEATER!

wishing for the first time in his life that he had worn socks,
LOL BLESS YOU FOR INCLUDING THIS LITTLE TIDBIT

“It’s my piercings,”
PIERCINGS!!! PIERCINGS OH MY GOD

He had his nipples pierced too
/OH MY GOD/

perching his hat backwards on his short, corn flour blonde hair.
FUCK, PIERCINGS /AND/ BLOND HAIR

Kai looked at his brother like he’d just said that Maroon5 still made good music.
OMG

If they were alone, he would have pulled out his cute pouty face bit even though Jongin had stopped falling for it about eight years ago.
Oh no ;; a cute pouty Kai...with piercings omg that would so work on me

There was only one rule and it was a simple one: someone says “Peter,” you

[good4_onething]

Bless you for this awesome prompt \o/

I read it and fell in love with the whole Jongin and Kai angle (it was different) and I liked how you didn't want the typical Jongin-is-a-stereotypical-bad-boy-and-Suho-is-practically-a-girl routine which was perfect for me because I don't write like that :)

So my brain immediately started whirring and now I'm tied up in a 10,000 words and counting mess of disillusioned teen Sukai feels .. ugh.. the humanity...

[amaxingbaek]

:D I'm still kind of apohp3oihqfia that someone would like this prompt so much. To be honest, seeing the same dynamics over and over again isn't really interesting to me, not to mention the fact that I don't really...enjoy when people make Joonmyun 100% wide-eyed virgin, Kai an asshole that smirks and does inappropriate things to Joonmyun, and Jongin that's just sleepy all the time. It's cute, but I don't know, it's just meh after a while, so that's why I didn't want that haha.

I'M SO HAPPY ToT Please take your time finishing it!! And thank you so much again!

[misszhangyixing]

Oooohhhh this is very interesting! I'm excited to read where will this go!^^

[good4_onething]

Thank you thank you <3
I won't post the finished fic on here (I don't really use LJ much) but if you want you can check out my asianfanfics acct (himinnasan) I will add it there and there's more sukai goodies ^^

[siseondul]

this is hilarious and im excited to see where this goes!
i love all the detail and anecdotes like the school being called 'Westcock' by students, the reason why newbies are called 'Charlies' and the fact you give the characters a little bg, in terms of who their parents are and how they came to the school. it makes the characters more 3d & much more likeable cos who rly likes spoilt rich kids?? lol.
the idea of jongin/kai as twins is genius, i wonder how they'll come abt to interact w joonmyeon.
He had essentially just called the kid a dick to his face and he was smiling.
of course sehun would respond well to that! their dynamics are great ;; obnoxious seho shipper alert.
im looking forward to the rest of this :)

[anonymous]

This is very intriguing. I like how you depict the differences between the twins and the bond between them too - realistic and easy. I enjoy your writing of Suho too =) Excited to see this story grow