Straps and Laces Chapter 3

[cuddlyfluff]

Making this one rated M to be safe

Orihime slowly made her way to the dressing room.  While Ichigo tried to process the thoughts in his head to make sure he wasn't dreaming.

He was alone in a lingerie store with Inoue Orihime, a very large chested, ditzy, and pretty much the hottest girl in the world.  At least that's what most of the people noticed

Comments

[seizansha]

man! you are SO mastering the cliffhanger!!! =DDD

once again, i can't believe how well you got ichigo down.

and orihime's innocence comes across beautifully in her actions too!

[cuddlyfluff]

thank you! i actually had a hard time with Orihimes character, she can be so simple but complicated @ the same time! =]

[arasia]

another cliffhangerrr!
it always leaves me wanting more.
this was the best chapter yet.
loved it!

[cuddlyfluff]

thank you! ♥

[genkisam]

Okay, I'm officially hooked. ^_^ Let me know when chapter 4 comes out!

[trito_chan]

Couldn't agree more! I'm hooked too and I can't wait for the next chapter!

You write really good...both Orihime and Ichigo are totally in character, and your writing style is very fluent, easy to read but keeps us eagerly expecting to see what happens next! More please!!

Arigato

[cuddlyfluff]

Thank you so much! *blush*
I'm happy to hear that you enjoy my fics because I tend to be very critical of my work...honestly I thought I did a poor job when I re-read it thats why I'm very greatfull that your comments help me boost my confidence
(^3^)/

Update

[cuddlyfluff]

Straps and Laces Chapter 4 is finally here!
(^3^)/

that was wonderful

[real_orihime]

that was an amazing story
i just love ichihime stories
i love your stories!

Re: that was wonderful

[cuddlyfluff]

Yay! It makes m happy that people are enjoying my stories! (^3^)/