Fic: Loving Rivals

[cuentosdelalma]

Title: Loving Rivals
Author: shana
Dedication: For zimena because she asked for this in ficmas.
Disclaimer: They do not belong to me. Also, not true. I made it all up.
Pairing: Jorge Gonçalves/Rodolfo Arruabarrena
Rating: R
Notes: Set on November 24, 2013, the morning of the Peñarol/Nacional rivalry match.

Comments

[zimena]

First of all: THANK YOU for doing this, and for writing such a beautiful fic about them! I'm very touched that you choose to do it, even though you probably don't have much own feelings and visions about these people.

You gave me so much of what I wanted, though! I especially love their tone of communication here. It has everything - it's warm and caring and shows their love very well, but there's also that beautifully dangerous undertone in the whole fic. When I made the request, this was the sort of feelings and emotions I had hoped to see, and you wrote exactly that.

Oh, and can I just say that the thought of them together on the night before the Clásico is very hot? I also absolutely adore the kiss, and if I have to pick one favorite moment in this fic, then it's definitely this one. It's so perfect, really.

Also... one comment about what you said about Rodolfo:

Rodolfo is special though. He has an easy laugh and charm that always draws him back.THIS! YES, THIS! I can picture him exactly like that. After all, I liked him

[cuentosdelalma]

I'm really glad you liked it. I didn't really have enough time to look them up as much as I would have liked, so I'm glad they seemed right to you. :D