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culuyetille

C/B drabbles: colour

Oct 10, 2006 01:59

Title: Colour
Rating: T
Author: lorielen
Disclaimer: Todd Haynes’, even though I’d treat them much better.
Written for prompt 005 - colour at velvet100
Word count: 145

(16/out/07)EDIT: because I no longer trust LJ with my material, I've moved Colour to IJ.

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Title: Blue
Rating: M
Author: lorielen
Disclaimer: Todd Haynes’, even though I’d treat them much better. ( Read more... )

velvet goldmine, fic

Comments 10

yesido October 10 2006, 02:40:00 UTC

As always, these are lovely: you manage to convey so much, with such elegance, in such a small space. Detail and emotion are so intertwined in your writing, both understated and assured. Thanks for posting.

culuyetille October 10 2006, 13:09:47 UTC

It's lovely feedback like yours that keeps me writing (aside from the voices in my head, that is) Thank you! ♥

splix October 10 2006, 03:14:40 UTC

Those were very lovely, very rich in imagery. :)

culuyetille October 10 2006, 13:10:32 UTC

:) thank you!

angel_of_dublin October 10 2006, 04:10:45 UTC

Loooove them. Specially the first one! So many details... ;)

culuyetille October 10 2006, 13:11:51 UTC

Aw, thanks, hon. These two are schmoop ♥

irrlicht74 October 10 2006, 21:43:58 UTC

Curt, however, clings stubbornly to his ratty black leather trousers

*purrs* And we love him for it, don't we? ;)

Lovely. Just lovely. I do so envy you that you're able to capture their characters so perfectly with so "few" words. I could write pages and would never succeed.

culuyetille October 10 2006, 22:31:42 UTC

*grins* yes, we do. And thank you, hon, praise from you fills me with glee *huggles* The funny thing is that I never do 'general' takes like you, I'm only able to see them through each other's perspective - which is why I can only write relationship fics, I think.

Oh and btw I've just read what you sent me of part 4. It's absolutely delicious. 'm sending it back to you with notes (mostly, just squeeing) ;]

irrlicht74 October 11 2006, 05:33:44 UTC

Weeeell...Have I ever written anything else but relationship fics? *scratches head* Erm...I don't think so. "General" or not, my fics always revolve around relationships, right? :)

*laughs* Squeeing is perfectly fine, darling. I LOVE squeeing. And I really hope to be able to write more on part 4 soon. :)

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culuyetille October 13 2006, 05:34:18 UTC

♥♥ aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the read!!