C/B drabbles for velvet100

Nov 09, 2006 21:43

Three Curt/Brian drabbles I've written for velvet100. I hope I'll be able to write something longer soon. And xr8fordgirl, I'm finally posting the drabble with the belly button ;)

Title: Untitled
Rating: R
Author: lorielen
Pairing: Curt/Brian
Disclaimer: Todd Haynes’, even though I’d treat them much better.
Written for prompt 006: warmth at velvet100.
Word count: 100.

(16/out/07) ( Read more... )

velvet goldmine, fic

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spartan_117 November 10 2006, 01:35:30 UTC
*sigh* I'll never look at a bottle of champaign the same again. *gets warms fuzzy feeling* I love them all especially that bit where Curt messes up Brian's makeup making him smile in the process.

Oh he said he loves Curt *sniffles*

Beautifully written as always, love *hugs*

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culuyetille November 10 2006, 01:41:29 UTC
Thanks, dear, I'm so-so glad you like these!

*hugs* Hee, that one gripped me last night when I woke up to drink water. I really wish Brian could've valued Curt's touch more than his eebil make-up. Thank goodness in fanfiction I can try to focus on their bright moments.

I bet he would say that a thousand times, worrying at first, then meaning it with all his heart, and then, finally, out of habit or as mannerism. *sniff*

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irrlicht74 November 10 2006, 17:25:32 UTC
You always render me speechless, love. Wow. I really can't tell which one I like best. I love them all, you know?

The first one is great, because he told Curt that he loved him, without making a "show" out of it. I mean, he just told him, period. Without making it the big thing it actually was. I love that. Okay, he was distracted when he did, and rightfully so ;), but still. Brilliant. And I'm very sure, Curt realized what Brian had wanted to get across.

The second one is just... *purrs* So very, very Curt. Especially the beginning. *purrs again*

And the third is AWWWWW! all over. I love Curt. I love how he always finds the perfect way to make Brian smile.

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culuyetille November 11 2006, 19:48:16 UTC
Aw dear, your words warm my heart. Even if my naughty muses weren't pestering me, I'd write for fb like that alone ;)

I love Curt. I love how he always finds the perfect way to make Brian smile.

*GRINS* that's SO what I wanted to work with, in that drabble. I've made a pact with myself to keep my writings for this pairing as fluffy as possible, so I had to work really hard around prompts like 'hollow' and 'obsession'. I always tried to look for a positive meaning of some sort, and when there was none, such as in 'obsession', I wanted to work with Curt breaking through Brian's steeling-of-heart. In the second one, the obvious and tempting thing would be to go with Curt's broken heart, but I can't touch that just yet. It's bad enough Todd did it, eh? ;)

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irrlicht74 November 12 2006, 00:44:21 UTC
And you solved all the problems you had so brilliantly, love, it's awesome. I think 'hollow' would've been a tough one for me, too, but truth be told, when I hear 'obsession', the first thing I relate to immediately is 'chocolate'. Or 'ice-cream'. *laughs* Maybe not what the "prompt people" intented, but what can I say? That's me. :D

It's bad enough Todd did it, eh? ;)

*nods* Definitely. Thank you for NOT writing it that way. *hugs*

Btw, did you like the "Parting" part of C/C? I wasn't sure whether it'd work or not. *is curious*

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culuyetille November 14 2006, 00:10:41 UTC
love, I'll write you a proper comment soon, but about the Parting, if you mean Chris' part, I absolutely adore it. It's gentle, quick and very very sweet.

*HUGGLES*

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beckytheelf November 12 2006, 02:15:00 UTC
Oh wow. I'm so glad that I just stumbled back again across your journal.
These little drabbles are so absolutely delicious and just perfect to read. I always admire people who manage to condense all of this into 100 words. Just absolutely perfect!
Lovely work on these little drabbles!

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culuyetille November 14 2006, 00:09:49 UTC
=] Thank you for the lovely fb!! I'm very glad you like these. To be true, I didn't have much practice in 100-worders, but the mod said we could grant cookies to our fav characters if we managed to make our drabbles exactly 100 words, and I really wanted to stuff Curt chubby, so ;]

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