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Jambo Rafiki ~ Part 2

Sep 18, 2013 22:23

Title: Jambo Rafiki - Part 2
( “Jambo” )

addi baba verse, pairing: adam/kris, rating: nc-17

Comments 13

jeweledvixen September 19 2013, 05:12:40 UTC

Another great chapter. I wondered how dangerous it would be for them to travel around rural Africa. I'm glad they made it safely to the hospital. I'm curious as to why Addi suddenly broke down. I wonder if it's the stark contrast between his world and the one he's in now. Anyway, I'm loving this journey.

The city is very pretty. So is the landscape. The hospital is not like any I've ever seen. It really makes you appreciate what we have here, even though we complain about our health care.

cunningdeb October 7 2013, 02:33:45 UTC

Sorry it took so long to reply, lots of work, school and personal craziness these last few weeks. Africa isn't the safest place to be but you know me, I won't let anything TOO bad happen to them. I'm working on Part 3 where Addi explains his reaction. I'm thinking of posting it soon, even if it's uber short, just to keep the story going. I feel like I'm letting everyone down by waiting so long between updates.

I agree, we should never complain our health care system (proud Canadian here) ... I've recently come to appreciate it very much.

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Deb <3333

thank you stealth1877 September 19 2013, 08:02:24 UTC

Fun and interesting reading, as always. Look forward to your next update!

Re: thank you cunningdeb October 7 2013, 02:34:42 UTC

Thanks so much. Life has been hectic but I hope to have something up soon.

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Deb <333

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cunningdeb October 7 2013, 02:36:08 UTC

I can barely handle watching people in so much need on TV, let alone seeing them in person. Kris and Addi will have a talk and it'll get better.

And you're right, lack of cuddle time takes it's toll too

Hope to have a short update posted soon

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pinkeurogirl September 19 2013, 12:15:10 UTC

Addi isn't used to this kind of stuff. I hope they all stay safe

cunningdeb October 7 2013, 02:43:05 UTC

I won't let anything TOO bad happen to them but in such a place, it would be hard to justify nothing happening.

Hope to have a short update posted soon

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lmichelle599 September 19 2013, 21:53:41 UTC

I do believe Addi has more to tell Kris about his past and I'm sure it'll be angsty.

Looking forward to more. :)

cunningdeb October 7 2013, 02:44:30 UTC

Addi definitely needs to talk to Kris. Hope to have a short update posted soon with that conversation

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