Making It Up - Part 2

[cunningdeb]

Title: Making it Up - Part 2
Verse: Addi Baba

Comments

[pinkeurogirl]

Oh has Addi made a mistake bringing kris here? Things were going so well too

[cunningdeb]

You'll just have to stay tuned to find out.

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Deb <333

[jeweledvixen]

I loved this. I loved the fact that Addi shaved off his beard and mustache for Kris. I loved the grasshoppers in the pants. But what has Addi done? This may not end well for either of them. o__O

[cunningdeb]

Well jewel, you'll just have to stay tuned to find out.

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Deb <333

[dayflower1]

Kris acted really excited to be alone on this vacation with Addi, but if they at Kris's home it won't be alone time. Kris 's family will be all around. I've forgot in this story does Kris's family know & accept that he's gay? I'll have to go back & check'cause now it will bug me until I can remember .

[cunningdeb]

Kris' family is aware he's gay and they accept him. They are aware of his relationship with Addi too. Still, wonder how this visit will play out ....

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Deb <333

[amberwinters]

What a thoughtful present and I like Addi trying to make a good first impression. Short but sweet chapter. Great job, Deb, can't wait to see how this goes down.

[cunningdeb]

Thanks amber. My schedule is going to be super busy for the next 10 weeks but I'll try my damnedest to keep writing.

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Deb <3333

[lmichelle599]

Is this a good surprise for Kris or not??

[cunningdeb]

I don't know ... okay, yeah I know ... but you'll have to stay tuned and find out LOL

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Deb <3333