Day One: a Bones fanfic

[cupcakebean]

 

Comments

[biba79]

Awwwww. I bet that they will be thinking about each other alot. And this was a perfect way to show that!

Very heartcrushing! &heart;

Thanks for the fic, it was lovely!

[cupcakebean]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this. =)

[bantam_shine]

*sighs happily*
This was absolutely lovely. Loved how you delved into the beginning of Booth & Brennan's new lives apart, but showed how they're never really apart because they're always thinking of each other.

[cupcakebean]

Thanks! I'm hoping if I wish hard enough, the writers will be on the same page as me. B&B can never truly be apart!

[cupcakebean]

Lol, thanks!

[bluewillowtree]

This could not be more perfect. That's a word I try to avoid using, but it's undoubtedly the best one for the gorgeous longing you've written. I just loved this.

[cupcakebean]

Wow, thanks! I'm so flattered!

A Long Slow Beautiful Dance

[nyre1]

This is just the first day and they are trying to fool themselves into thinking it will get better it they are apart. But I think want you are showing is they are just starting their long slow dance back together and the reflecting pool.

Thanks for your beginning.

Nyre

Re: A Long Slow Beautiful Dance

[cupcakebean]

That's what I was going for. Now let's hope the writers are on the same page! Thanks for reading and commenting, hun. =)