Behind that 'Smile' 8/?

Mar 09, 2009 16:03

Title: Behind that 'Smile'
Rating:PG-13 i guess...
Pairing:KyuMin
Side Pairings: YeWook, EunHae, KangTeuk , HanChul, ZhouRy
Chapter: 8/?
Genre:Romance, Comedy(?), Sad, Drama
Summary: As a kid, Sungmin was always abused by his mother. One day Minnie's mom came home drunk nd beat him and without knowing put him for sale. A new family bought him nd he ( Read more... )

zhoury, kyumin, kiwon, hanchul, yewook, eunhae, kangteuk

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SPOT!! cupcakemini5 March 13 2009, 02:41:19 UTC
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sjdbskluv

chikamystica

hotarumyst

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Re: SPOT!! sjdbskluv March 14 2009, 21:34:58 UTC
XD innocent minnie? ohhh, i think not! kyu was pretty surprised that his little minnie was wanting it so much!!! XD

O.o sex talk? *shudders* i agree with heenim, i would've made my escape...
awww, teukie is such an umma!!!! cute!

YeWook fought and made up!! they are such an adorable couple... wait. Kyumin is adorable. they are... a sweet couple!! ^o^

O.O ?!
wah? no! ohmigosh!! evil, crazy, lunatic lady... nooo~ she should leave him alone!! X/ ohh! the suspense! what's gonna happen next?

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Re: SPOT!! cupcakemini5 March 14 2009, 21:49:14 UTC
hahahah yup
Minnie was not innocent here!
But just a spoiler: He'll be even naughtier in other chapters, maybe next chappie >3
lol

hahah ya
Heenim tried his best
But Teukie wanted his child's safety...i guess?
lol

hahaha
KyuMin = Adorable
YeWook = Adorkable

lol

Yeah that lady is...=_=
But i need her for 3 more chapter
then you can kill her
I don't mind lol

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SPOT!! (2) cupcakemini5 March 13 2009, 02:42:08 UTC
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sungminxx

purpleafterglow

blue_starzz33

candie_box

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Re: SPOT!! (2) purpleafterglow March 14 2009, 02:04:49 UTC
THanks for the spot, mate!^^
This chapter made me LAUGH so hard!! XDDD
I loved it! XD

And the beginning... nicve way to start out!! :D
haha
Once again, you make me fall deeper in love with the always-loud Heechul!!^^
Lmao! "THE SEX TALK!!!!!! DX" I LOVE IT!! XD haha

Wow that was a rather... shor break up! lol But I'm glad their pain didn't last long! [: Haha and I loved how they got back togehter... in the shower ;]
Haha xD

I loved it how Yesung put the blindflod on Ryeowook and he ran into Sungminnie's room and takes a picture of KyuMin, after being seduced!! XD

And in the end when all of suju forgot about Teukie and Heechul! xD

Your fic made me so happy! I couldn't stop laughing or smiling! xD

Well... except for the end... creepy mother |:
Haha xD

Could I have another spot? Please? :3
hehe

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Re: SPOT!! (2) cupcakemini5 March 14 2009, 15:51:57 UTC
hahahahah i know right!??
I was drooling while i wrote it
But now that i re-read it...it could've been better T^T
Oh well...up comming chapters will have MORE XD

lol yes, yes. Heenim is just love lol

It was a 7 day break up placed in a 4 minute time frame!
I wasn't gonna get them back togther until after 3 chapters
but i was crying at the thought so i was like
"NO! they're getting back together now!" lol

hahah Wookie got seduced then he totaly forgot XD!!

yes....that mother is creepy =_=
And yes, you can have a spoy again

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yoochunfan21 March 13 2009, 03:52:07 UTC
Yay! You updated!! :D

Ha haa Kyumin got in trouble for doing it! XP

Wow!! Hanchul! You would do THAT at the PARK! :O Wow
And Kangtuek!! Shame shame! Ha haa Jk

When I read that Yewook broke up I was like NOOO!!!! THEY CAN'T!!!! :O
Ha haa, but they got back together! :D And in a hot way too! Ha haa
Henry is so smart! Lol

Hey hey hey WHAO whao whao! WHY is the mom going to kill people?! Oh hell no!! Ha haa
She better not hurt any hair on their head!! I will go in this fic and hurt her!! XO Lol
I'll kick her with my fist! Or punch her with my foot!
I'm babbleing -_-

Lol

ANYWAY!!! I hope you update soon!! :D Can't wait!

Ima stalk you for the next chapter!! :P
Lol
Update soon!! :D

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Spot candie_box March 13 2009, 05:49:51 UTC
I don't know where to start this is so...*fan girl SQUEAL*
I am dying of laughter through out the story

Kyu min is so the first couple that inherited the umma death-hug, i wonder who is gonna get the umma scream of death =D

Hanchul is so naughty they most likely got it from their parents *cough..kangteuk..cough*

It seems like heeteuk fighting is nothing new to them lol they were talking about the WEATHER XD~~
they ran out of popcorn so they finally decided to stop the fight LOL

when i was reading the part about yewook i thought you were gonna let it hang until the next chapter i am so happy the resolved the problems ^^

i can't believe how psycho the mom is

You're one of the best
can't wait for next chapter ^_^

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Re: Spot cupcakemini5 March 13 2009, 20:57:51 UTC
hahahahah XD!!
HanChul probably DID get it form KangTeuk XD!!!

hahah yeah they happen alot
so the kids have learned to dela iwth it
They were more worried about the weather XD!!

Yeah
I was going to not make YeWook get back together
til 3 chapters after
but i was crying as i wrote that
so i was like "I don't want to die now, and this is too sad!!" so i decided
to get them back together
In a 7day time frame placed in 6 minutes XD!

Hahah thank youu~

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Re: Spot candie_box March 14 2009, 17:22:12 UTC
heredity is a scary thing :\
and yewook are to cute to split

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tsuki1512 March 16 2009, 00:55:17 UTC
oh ~~ Minnie ah, so seme >"<

but Chullie, dont be jealious like this

ZhouRy? a new couple ^^

what will happen to our KyuMin ~~ hope this is not dangerous as I think

thanks for writing and posting

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cupcakemini5 March 16 2009, 01:08:19 UTC
hahah yes, our once innocent Minnie is no longer so innocent
lol

hahahah Thank you for reading~
and commenting

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tsuki1512 March 18 2009, 07:52:01 UTC
so can I translate this fic into our language ^^ Vietnamese

i will credit for you and put your link into my translation

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cupcakemini5 March 18 2009, 21:23:45 UTC
Omo~
I
ll be more than honored if you do~
hahah, yes you can ^-^

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sungminxx March 17 2009, 09:43:50 UTC
what the?
I forgot to read this!
wahhhhhhh!
I'm so damn!
sory!sorry!sorry!:(

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sungminxx March 17 2009, 10:01:02 UTC
what???!!
ryeomin's mom is back!!
Noo!! *slaps u*

hahaha!
sex talk?that's funny!XD
Yewook part was HOTT!
I'm glad they're back together now..

Teukie! Take care of Ryeomin!!
I know you can do it!
Yay! Kyumi is still alive.
bhahhhaa
this is awesome.
XD

update!update!XD
hehhehe.

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cupcakemini5 March 17 2009, 20:55:34 UTC
ahahah its okay~!

*gets slapped*
TT-TT!!!
i'm sorryyy
It has to be done~
It wrote itself T^T!

ahahah yes, sex talk x3
Wasn't it??
I try lol

Yes, Teukie will kick anyoen who dares ouch his children~
hahah yes, i want KyuMi to be alive again. :p

I shalls update soon~!
tehehe ♥

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