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[cure_my_phobia]

If you have any questions, comments, concerns, or suggestions related to my portrayal of Guy, please leave them here! I enjoy reading what other's think bout my role playing, and I will listen carefully to anything anybody has to say. If you guys think I reacted to something the wrong way then you can post your concern here

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[distemperate]

I'm about to fall asleep so forgive me if this comment is unintelligible ;; But from what I've seen, you've been playing him as too naive and unintelligent and too overpowered by his phobia.

Guy is a much more clever and secretive character than you're showing -- yeah, he puts on a nice boy-next-door show, but not to this extent. He plays off of Jade's sarcastic remarks rather than letting them fly over his head. And he would absolutely know what "jargon" meant -- he's smart and experienced with the world, remember that contrast with Luke. He just seems... kind of airheaded right now, which isn't right for him, and it makes it really difficult to reply to him in character when he isn't understanding things that he would understand

[cure_my_phobia]

I can see what you're saying. This is one of the reasons why I'm on hiatus. I'm trying to re work his character because I feel like I've over done some things myself. And sorry about the "Jargon" thing, it's just that to begin with I was debating whether they really did have that word in world. Also I know about the phobia. I shouldn't make it so dramatic, I'll try and work on that too.

I understand everything your saying, and I will honestly try and work on it. I hate playing people badly and I can tell I'm starting to lack things with Guy. Also since Luke and Asch are joining this game soon, hopefully, then maybe then I can work a little better.

I've never been in a game without Luke or Asch so this was a little different and it made it hard for me to think about things.

Thank you though~ I'm glad you told me these things. 8)

[lunchpenalty]

I agree with Dist-mun about the phobia and a little bit about his naivety. However, a word like "jargon" could possibly be considered slang, and therefore might not exist in the world of Abyss. I really think it's a 50/50 thing and it should be left up to the -mun playing the character. (Although personally, I do believe it is a word Guy would know.) The safest route would probably be to assume Guy has a fairly large vocabulary database and would know slang - especially those of commoners.

THAT BEING SAID.I really appreciate your attitude about it. It shows maturity when you take a critique like the way you did. You understand it and want to make yourself a better Guy-mun. So, I really applaud you here