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[curia_regis]

Title: Wonder
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Length: ~2000
Disclaimer: Harry Potter doesn't belong to me.
Warning(s): None
Summary: "For Hermione, the wizarding world was a place of wonder."
Author/Artist Note(s): Written for vane_nt, for dmhgficexchange. Thank you to aigooism for the beta!

Comments

[songquake]

OMG, what wonderful, wonderful fluff! I'm all gooey inside now!

And I love the simplicity of the language you use here. Even though the characters can certainly think complex thoughts using big words, it's nice to see simple declarative sentences. Especially such whimsical ones as... Whoa. I just re-read the story and couldn't find any single sentence that stood out; what you did so well here was juxtapose sentences that would normally seem run-of-the-mill into paragraphs that are entirely whimsical and fantastic.

Great work, here.

[curia_regis]

Hee, I think my tendency to read children's stories has influenced my writing. One of my favourite authors likes really simple language but quite creepy ideas.

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it!