The familiarity of it.

Feb 03, 2006 19:49

I want to watch you dress in the morning. The shirts lined up in the wardrobe, blue on Thursdays since you were a child. Shaving at the sink bare-chested as the water turns foamy and you ask if I'd like a cappuccino. I dry your face with a towel then breathe the soapy smell of your jaw. The hairs at the base of your throat are curled up against ( Read more... )

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arghreality February 3 2006, 18:26:10 UTC
Never has suburban yuppie life seemed less depressing.

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hi zuchlinen August 28 2006, 04:27:08 UTC
This is absolutely phenomenal. I feel like any description that I could write about the images it revealed to me would sound downright trite when compared with what I'm commenting on. Many kudos to you for opening up a piece of my imagination which, more often than not, and may I add sadly, gets very little stimulation. Bravo.

-Tim-

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added! nyaow September 6 2006, 12:40:58 UTC
i agree with this post.

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