Putting holes in happiness [CHAPTER 13]

Jul 05, 2013 02:01


Title: Putting holes in happiness
Chapter: 13/?
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, friendship, smut.
Warnings: Angst. Smut.
Ratings: PG-13 to NC-17
Pairings: AoixKazuki. AoixUruha. Aoix?. Uruhax?. KazukixByou. KaixOC. Rukix?...Etc.
Disclaimer: I only own my imagination ♪
Synopsis: Some people have this tendency to destroy the best they have...When love is caught ( Read more... )

smut, aoixuruha, aoixkazuki, puttingholesinhappiness

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irmavep777 July 5 2013, 00:33:07 UTC
FIRST HERE!!!!

yeeeeeeeeesssssss!!!
bless the person who sent the video! It was meeeeee!:D
yeah, we know it wasn't but still it worked right~
oh man I think that was the sweetest sex ever<3 I totally loved their talk<3333

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cursedhurricane July 5 2013, 09:09:53 UTC
Waaah you're first after ages Seli babe!

So it was you! I should have known lol!

Thank you dear <3 love you <3

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blacmeissa July 5 2013, 07:17:44 UTC
Flying Flamingo ? xD That will be my new super hero name xD

Somehow I wonder if Mizuki etc are trying to get them to break up...I mean they are not even in the same line of friends with Yuu.

What I adore about this sex scene is that 99% of the time when penetration hurts usually it starts to feel good and they continue but you changed it from Kou wanting it rough to wanting it sweet.

Another thing I adore is that you use these classic bands songs a lot like X and LUNA SEA idk it gives the story a sort of classy flair to it.

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cursedhurricane July 5 2013, 09:08:21 UTC
Well the flying flamingo actually happened to me IRL. The whole beach scene even (there was no sex though lol).
I was in love with this colleague 2 years ago but he had a gf in Paris. That night he told me that he wanted to think about it & that he felt smthg for me.
We really saw the flamingo, we kept looking at each other with the urge to kiss yet nothing happened. When we left, I told him that I was respecting the fact he had a gf by not kissing him...

WELL. That's the story behind this scene. Tbh I wrote the first chapters two years ago after he kind of sent me off......(& he broke up with her 3 months later -___-)

Now about the sex, Kouyou got more pain than pleasure but because he's so infatuated he'd rather have Yuu get most of all at this point. It's how badly he loves him.

I hope you like this song. Although it reminded me of my ex, I really like this song. Besides, X, Luna Sea are bands that Gazemen grew up with so it's only fair they're so promoted by me in this story lol.

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blacmeissa August 15 2013, 06:06:08 UTC
I am so sorry I haven't been on LJ till you posted the A Series update :/

That's cool you saw the flamingo,,there are supposed to some here in the wild but I've never seen them.

Wait is that surfer dude ?
Well I am glad that you didn't kiss him or get with him. He sounds like a player imo.

Yep but it's rare that you see them get more pain than pleasure in most fics which is why I liked it cause it was different.

<3

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redberrie July 5 2013, 07:59:39 UTC
「We are creating chaos, thought Yuu.
We are unforgivable, thought Kouyou.
There was no turning point.」

woohoo, whoever could it be that had sent that vid? hmms, masa himself?

yayyy for yuu manning up! ヽ(・∀・)ノ & kouyou thank you for giving him a chance.. seeing yuu cry with the hidden heartbreak underneath must have pulled so badly at your heartstings.. ・゜・(ノД`)

they're sweet together~ can't wait for more, thank you for the terrific chapter! <3

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cursedhurricane July 5 2013, 09:14:04 UTC
Aaah who could it be hu?

You totally got the thing here. It might sound like pity that Kouyou gave Yuu a chance but I think it's only to heal his heart. He saw Yuu drunk because of Kazuki's cheating, he saw him hurting & it's only faire he gives themselves this chance on the beach.

Thank you for this sweet comment <3

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hanakotoba_21 July 5 2013, 10:59:16 UTC
I was waiting for this chapter... and I'm crying again... It was so f****** beautiful... And the beach...you unlock memories that was buried inside me for so long...amazing chapter, amazing story, amazing writer... *bow*

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velvet_liquor July 12 2013, 16:38:35 UTC
Le commentaire une semaine après la lecture c'est semi inutile, mais bon, pour le principe..

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Ils ont fait des bébés, ils ont fait des bébés, ils ont fait des bébééééééés~ ♥
tu m'as mis le kiki tout dur quand nanoi il a fait splash

Maintenant la question est... QUI A ENVOYE LE MESSAGE?! Moi je dis, c'est Byou, parce qu'il veut se débarrasser de Nanoi et que comme ça, il récupère Kazuki parce que il veut ses fesses et que Kazuki il lui a dit d'aller se faire foutre è_é voilà, je lance mon pari è_é xD

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