A series of you and me [CHAPTER 2]

[cursedhurricane]

Title: A series of you and me
Chapters: 2/?
Genre: Angst. Romance. Smut.
Warnings: Angst. Depressed Uruha.
Ratings: PG-13 (R later?)
Pairings: AoixUruha
Disclaimer: I only own my imagination ♪
Synopsis: Kouyou finds his life ruled by the glimpses of him he can see.

Comments

[shizukasou]

Yet I live here now, not far from your place, I work in your street, I see you every morning behind the glass of the coffee shop and I yearn for you in silence because it's my punishment. God, this line just killed me. Poor Kou. ):
I laughed so hard at the Kamasutra book though. Thankfully he didn't stumble upon Yuu in that moment 'cause I think he would have just dug himself a hole on the spot or something. But I so wish they're finally gonna meet someday. THEY HAVE to get back together, and for good this time around.
Yay for holidays! Looking forward to you showering us with updates then hun ♥

[shizukasou]

OH WOW AM I FIRST. O:

[cursedhurricane]

YAY YOU ARE!

[cursedhurricane]

I'm sorry it did...I just hope I won't kill you more before the end of this story^^
Aw I think something worst than that would have happened lol. Hm, exactly like the real ones, that would be great if they could just allow themselves to love a guy etc...

And I'm so going to try to fulfill your wishes :) ♥♥ Thank you darling, always!

[gothdeathangel]

The pain and longing of Uruha shown here is almost poetic .Love the quote from Frankenstein :)
Awwww they almost met , why did Uruha have to run away !!!!! Hope Aoi notices him soon
Kamasutra !! that was hilarious . You update quite soon ( well sooner than you normally take ) , you are awesome for doing that :)
Its good that you are free from the stress of the exams :D
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

[cursedhurricane]

Ah I'm so loving your reward ♥ I wasn't sure about this story and you make me feel better.
And well, you know it won't be that easy lol. And usually I don't update this quickly lol, bless my holidays! I can sit and type down my ideas without worrying over my studies^^
And next chap soon :)

[confusion_hime]

This is truly beautiful. Now I understand why Kouyo has this deep and agonizing yearning for Yuu. My poor baby... This almost brought me to tears, but for some reason it's not because of sadness, but of happiness. I don't know. I did feel Kouyo's emotions in this chapter but that scene in the bookstore when Yuu saw Kouyo's image as he left made me hopeful that after all, maybe Kouyo's love will be reciprocated.

The last line killed me though. XD But I really, really love how you describe emotions and details. I feel like reading a poem or a prose.

Hope you will update soon and enjoy your holiday!^^

[cursedhurricane]

Oh darling, thank you for your kind words. I don't even know how to reply because even though things may look hopeless in life, there is always a thin ray of light in the darkness...

My my, I wouldn't go this far but thank you so much ♥

I will and enjoy yours as well ♥

[haruxsaya]

Wow, such strong emotions~! It is amazing how you make this a perfect blend of such heartbreaking sorrow and happiness~ >.< I can not wait to read more~! :D

[cursedhurricane]

Ah but this is the wonderful power of angst! How it both breaks your heart and how it can also makes you believe in hope and happiness...
Soon, very soon, thanks for commenting :) ♥

[colberry]

Truly gorgeous. The emotions here are quite poignant, the yearn Kouyou has yet the conviction he has to keep away although there is nothing else he wants more... It's a beautiful little tragedy and I find myself yearning alongside him.

The Kamasutra book was an awesome touch, giving us a little lightheartedness but not so much that it takes away from the story's tone. I've been in that kind of situation before, oh god.. Grabbing the first thing you see and running the hell out -- only in my case I grabbed canned milk at the supermarket XDD

His every days were filled with coffee smell, his black coat...
The image of this really sits well with me. Even if it is to convey Kouyou's monotony, I love the juxtaposition between how the coffee is so near to him, almost stifling, and Yuu is so far away that all he has is his black coat to gaze upon. Metaphors such as this make me wanna keyboard smash just a little :3 (asdfghjk).

Beautiful work as always.
And I can assure you I'll be so much better at commenting *on time* haha! <

[cursedhurricane]

Can I just nod dumbly and give you a hug?

You know I'm an angst lover (they say we love unhappy stories because of our own unhappiness...I wonder if it's true) and a love that can't be fulfilled is just so qekljqdsekf. I don't have words to express what I feel about it lol.

Ah, I don't even know from where came the Kamasutra thing. Seriously XD And well better be canned milk than the Kamasutra dear haha!

It makes me happy that you like this one ♥ I'm just sitting here with this dumb smile. I don't have anything to add at your little wandering of the mind :)

Thank you, coming from you, let's say it, a poetress, I feel so honoured ♥
And what are you kidding, it's a perfect comment seriouslyyyyyy ♥♥ ILOVEYOU.