fic: Every Mile Is Two

Mar 17, 2006 00:02


Every Mile Is Two, PG-13

Warnings: Implied character deaths.

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innie_darling March 17 2006, 06:14:52 UTC
It only took Sam a few months to wander back, and it took even less time for Dean to take him back. Oh, wow. The boys' love for each other and Dean's vulnerability and John's weariness all rang true. Great job!

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curtain__call March 19 2006, 17:21:07 UTC
Thaaaaanks! I'm glad it all came across like I wanted it to. :-)

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starry_ice March 17 2006, 06:19:33 UTC
Dean, you can stop now. Sam is waiting for you. Go take care of your brother, son.

*sobs* Aww, that was so tragic! But beautifully written and a great read. Thanks for sharing!

Now I'm curious about what exactly happened that lead to all this...

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curtain__call March 19 2006, 17:24:22 UTC
Thank you for reading! And commenting....it's make me feel warm and fuzzy. :-D

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jellicle March 17 2006, 14:11:32 UTC
That was painful and sad and beautiful. But the boys ended up together, because one could never go on without the other.

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curtain__call March 19 2006, 17:26:59 UTC
Yes, I don't think they could ever really make it alone again. Hence them always ending up together. ;-)

Thanks for reading!

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storydivagirl March 17 2006, 14:51:04 UTC
This is a great piece. I love how Sam and Dean both miss each other equally and how Sam comes back to the fight...and that end! Gah. Killer, but wonderful.

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curtain__call March 19 2006, 17:29:20 UTC
Literally a killer, huh? ;-)

Thanks for the read!

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pixel_0 March 17 2006, 19:44:01 UTC
Oh, what a hearbreaking blow. There's so much subtle pain in this that just really hurts. (Does that make sense? It's not a bloated, overdone death!fic. It's quiet and sad and that, I think, makes it hurt all the more.) The end is simply devastating.

It only took Sam a few months to wander back, and it took even less time for Dean to take him back.

Beautiful line. I really can't say enough good things about this fic, and everything I loved about it. Thank you for sharing this. :)

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curtain__call March 19 2006, 17:33:26 UTC
Yes, the "subtle pain" makes sense. I don't like it when something is overdone (in writing especially) - less is more, huh?

Thank you for the lovely comment! It made me smile.

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