Comments | curtiss: A Short Story (Naked)

curtiss

A Short Story (Naked)

Dec 13, 2005 10:25

[Title]

(Introduction)
(Precipitating Incident)__/
(Rising Action)---+
(Climax)
--\
(Falling Action)
(Denouement)

*For Heather

Comments 10

fearsheep December 13 2005, 17:28:24 UTC

I liked it, pretty good story, all in all.

curtiss December 13 2005, 20:16:07 UTC

Apparently some code got spilled before the title.

Thanks. It's my greatest work to date.
I'm thinking of attempting a great American novel based on some of the same plot structures. You know, one that will go down in history.

childrenatplay December 14 2005, 00:22:08 UTC

It left me feeling empty inside.

curtiss December 15 2005, 07:06:54 UTC

Thank God.

mortalgoddess December 14 2005, 04:14:41 UTC

I think you should submit it to the New Yorker.
I love it.

curtiss December 15 2005, 07:06:41 UTC

I'll look into it.
I thought there was going to be candy...

dolphinbottle December 14 2005, 14:25:29 UTC

(Naked)

curtiss December 15 2005, 07:07:14 UTC

Sex!

vengefulgoat December 15 2005, 01:57:13 UTC

man, you need to make a compilation of your work. you could make a couple of bucks.

curtiss December 15 2005, 07:05:20 UTC

I could use a couple of bucks.