Comments | curuchamion: I wrote a thing!

curuchamion

I wrote a thing!

Feb 16, 2011 23:39

Possibly even a good thing. I don't know, it's half past eleven PM my time and I didn't exactly eat dinner, so I might just be posting in a fit of overoptimism... but it is a thing ( Read more... )

jadzia dax, kira, sisko, teamfic, quark, odo, star trek: ds9

Comments 9

dbskyler February 17 2011, 18:32:47 UTC

Oooh, this is indeed good! It's better than good, it's fantastic! You've got all the character voices down perfectly, and I could just see every expression on Odo's face throughout the whole thing. Well done!

amphibian8 February 17 2011, 19:52:01 UTC

Nicely done story - I could see the actors in the parts as I read the story -you captured them so perfectly. I love Odo. Keep writing please.

pitry February 17 2011, 21:54:57 UTC

That was brilliant! Your Odo is so much in character it's frightening. And he and Quark are just as much a joy to read as they are to watch. :D

haikitteh February 23 2011, 05:09:19 UTC

Just fantastic! You really captured the cadence of the show, and the dynamics of the characters.

chesari February 23 2011, 06:54:58 UTC

This is wonderful! :) Great Odo POV, and I love how he interacts with the other characters, particularly Quark and Kira - perfectly in tune with their relationships on the show.

I do have one little nitpick. O'Brien's accent being written out kind of bugged me - didn't flow with the rest of the fic, I thought.

curuchamion February 28 2011, 06:43:26 UTC

'O'Brien's accent being written out kind of bugged me - didn't flow with the rest of the fic, I thought.'

You're right. I was being sloppy there, going with "traditional" Irish-esque spelling instead of actually listening to Miles's voice. *fixes*

(Thanks for the nitpick; I don't often use a beta, being pretty qualified at the technical stuff myself, so I wind up missing little mistakes like that. :-)