catorce (or 2024, part ii)

[curvasud]

For pendules.

Title: Catorce (or 2024, Part II)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jon Alonso/Luca Leite (K/S and S/X implied)
Disclaimer: Entirely fiction. If you’re uncomfortable with reading about footballers’ children/family, you should not proceed.
Summary: “Give fathers some credit. Consider talking to yours. He might understand better than you think.”

Comments

[lamechante]

It totally made my day: you're so gifted♥

[curvasud]

Thank you, I'm so pleased you like it!

[lamechante]

Right more, please♥ Every time I read something written by you it's a great great pleasure.

[sanzina89]

This is amazing! :)

I love how you described Kakà and "Give fathers some credit. Consider talking to yours. He might understand better than you think.". I totally awwwwed. ♥ And this "I know. Your father is a weirdo." made me laugh. Oh Jon! xD

Great job! ♥

[curvasud]

Thank you for your comment!

[vlieger]

oh, this is so gorgeous, i don't even know where to start. i have no coherent feedback, just. so, so much love.

[curvasud]

Thank you, Kla! :)

[darkblue]

I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START, VY. So good, and I feel a little guilty for liking this so much, but I do.

“My little Luca, always so polite.”
Of course he's polite. ♥

I love how Jon talks about how ten is so early but he falls asleep too. XD. And their talk with Kaka. And what he told Jon and asdrftnbgyfvrfg ALL OF IT.

[curvasud]

♥ THANK YOU, LOVE.

[pendules]

I am smiling like an idiot right now, Vy. I love them. Best present ever. I want this 'verse to go on forever.

Luca/Jon > Jon/Lexie, or whatever else people have been writing or sort of writing. Hahaha. Can they be my new OTP? I love how you wrote them, and I love the "fight for love" bit, and how it could basically be something that's actually happening somewhere out there to any two boys. And Ricky is a weirdo, but still a lovable weirdo. Everything he said was perfect, and I sort of flailed at the Be good to my son part.

You are making me ship it even more. But this is completely wonderful. Thank you so much, seriously. ♥

[curvasud]

I love you! ♥