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[cut_blood_tears]

I wish I could die sometimes,
Drown in a pool of my tears,
dont want to be sad,
but iam,
I wish I could die sometimes,
escape from this hell,

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[anonymous]

Wow that was deep... I bet I can be just as deep by arranging some cheap ass words just like that!!

This pain, it eats me whole,
Swallowing me from the inside out,
This hurt is so unreal,
No one can understand this pain I feel,
I want to die as my blood flows out,
Suicide is what lifes all about.

I WROTE THAT IN 24 SECONDS... I TIMED IT! HOWS THAT FOR DEEP POETRY?!

Yeah before you actually think about being proud of your "poetry" Maybe you should actually find out what poetry IS. Because it's NOT a bunch of painful looking words about you wanting to die arranged in a way that sounds dark and thoughtfull... no sorry.

[toothbrush_sex]

totally agree...and that person's 24 second poem kicks your poem's ASS.

and i bet u worked on urs all day.