one love, two mouths (yixing/luhan)

Aug 16, 2013 22:42

Title: One Love, Two Mouths
Fandom: EXO
Characters/Pairings: Yixing/Luhan
Rating: NC-17
Notes/Warnings: ~2.1K words. pwp (pretty much - barebacking, switching, brief rimming.). spell-checked, but also rather unbeta-ed. first time writing smut?

Luhan gets jealous. Yixing isn't sure whether this is supposed to be a punishment or a reward. )

!fic, fandom: exo, fic: exo, ship: layhan

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hiddenmeghanis August 17 2013, 02:28:14 UTC
fufufu don't be an awkward unicorn
this is good!
jealously manly han is my favorite tho so i'm a little biased
thanks for sharing~

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cut_thestring August 18 2013, 04:58:56 UTC
i'm always an awkward unicorn /o\
i love manry~ han too. though all types of luhan i like too D:
thank you! glad you er, enjoyed it~

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lafeaux August 17 2013, 03:16:19 UTC
SCREAMS i love this and i love you dkfjsghadfhdsgsasdlk

Luhan is lying on the bed, legs bent and spread, two fingers buried deep in his ass. The sight leaves Yixing speechless. "Hey." Luhan’s voice is breathless, and Yixing feels himself harden fully, mesmerised as Luhan’s fingers continue to slide easily in and out of his hole, making wet and obscene squelching noises, the boy’s cock full and weeping against his stomach.

this is my favorite part okay byE

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cut_thestring August 18 2013, 04:59:53 UTC
ohmygod why did you quote this back at me that's embarrassing stahp
hehehe glad you liked it bb!

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illusiontooreal August 17 2013, 08:06:05 UTC
i'm totally cool with you writing porn as a profession in the future. /shot

yeah.

Yeaah.

/runs away into the sunset

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cut_thestring August 18 2013, 05:02:28 UTC
no, you probably wouldn't want that (ノдヽ)
thanks for reading/leaving a comment!

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misshoa August 17 2013, 08:13:32 UTC
i absolutely loved this, i would quote my favourite parts, but there are so many i don't know where to start /o.o\
apart from layhan being one of my fav otps these days, i really liked the switiching-thing! it gives the story a nice touch.

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cut_thestring August 18 2013, 05:17:59 UTC
haha, i'm finding it's weird for porn i wrote to be quoted back at me so it's perfectly fine ㅂㅅㅂ
i'm glad you liked it! and yeah, they seem like that type of couple, you know?

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nestababe August 17 2013, 21:39:58 UTC
first time for smut!! it was good!!! not bad at all :D

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cut_thestring August 18 2013, 05:18:18 UTC
thanks, i'm relieved you think so (:

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