Comments | cut_thestring: a bunch of drabbles: exo edition

cut_thestring

a bunch of drabbles: exo edition

Oct 30, 2013 02:00

Edit 25/08/23 deleted a drabble.

7 minutes
Fem!Chen/Lay, pg-13, 680 words.
In which Jongdae’s cousin Joonmyun is hosting a party, and she somehow gets roped into 7 minutes in heaven with Zhang Yi-fucking-xing. Originally posted here.
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!fic, ship: fanxing, ship: xingdae, fandom: exo, fic: exo, ship: layhan

Comments 13

charliebnim October 30 2013, 02:05:14 UTC

I have absolutely no critiques for you omg! WTF ... i was like who would dare and make a critique ...

UPS ... just remembered one...

THESE SHOULDN'T BE DRABBLES! BUT FICS ! FICS I SCREAM FOREVER AND TO THE UNIVERSE ! ALL OF THESE FUCKING DRABBLES SHOULD BE FICS GDI! <3

cut_thestring October 31 2013, 12:55:31 UTC

Haha I was worried about characterisation with genderbending xD
But thank you~~ awww I have a few plot bunnies for the layhan verses, but we'll see if I can flesh them out! I'm glad you enjoyed them.

charliebnim October 31 2013, 22:17:19 UTC

<3<3<3 YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

thesockmonster October 30 2013, 02:05:56 UTC

I didn't know I needed fem!Lay in my life until now.

cut_thestring October 31 2013, 13:00:05 UTC

I was inspired by some other fem!Lay fics... the idea of it really does stick o-o

pretend_parties October 30 2013, 06:51:29 UTC

hi there :) just wanted to tell you that these were all such lovely reads ^^

Thank you for writing them hun \o//

i especially liked the last one. there's just something so very intriguing

cut_thestring October 31 2013, 13:01:48 UTC

I really like how that one turned out, I admit.
Thank you for reading, dear! :) glad you enjoyed.

wooniste October 30 2013, 12:24:54 UTC

I enjoyed every single one of them! domestic au! was my fav though :3

cut_thestring October 31 2013, 13:03:24 UTC

Fanxing is perfect for domestic!au~ Thanks for reading!

endonucleases October 30 2013, 13:37:53 UTC

SCREAMS I SHIP ALL OF THIS. this post is stuff of dreams

het!chenlay was so cute. they're so fluffy and cute with each other irl so they're perfect for dumb-teens-in-love/first love au's... awkward make out sessions and hand holding and cute dates where they need to get driven to the movies by jongdae's older brother minseok. /throws up from the cute

unf to both layhans. the first one reminded me of when harry met sally: best friends in love at a new year's party. i'd love a prequel that culimates or elaborates on this line: She can feel her mood unintentionally get gloomier as she watches them, hating herself for the simple fact that last week, Yixing realised she is love with her best friend. And that realisation has both messed everything up, and kept it all the same, and she hates it.and the college fuckbuddies one ahhhhhhhh. i remember reading the original a while ago but i never commented, even though i really loved it. i just love layhan's comfortable dynamics but always with an undercurrent of emotional depth that both of ( ... )

cut_thestring October 31 2013, 13:28:11 UTC

sobs THANK YOU FOR THIS LOVELY COMMENT <3 very, very appreciated~
yes chenlay are very dumb and squishy so a big YES to hand-holding and first dates (y) sounds like you need to write that ;)

i've actually never watched that o-o though i just looked it up and WOW unintentional mirroring.
maybe i did start writing something like that and it will need major revision before public reveal tbh i'd rather write a fluffy sequel where they just keep staring at each other and shyly smile when their eyes catch, and then chen tells them he wants to barf whenever he looks at them... nuuu stop putting plot bunnies in my head i have exams ;~;