I suck

[cute_loser24]

I just read what my grade for my analysis paper was and I got a 115/150, but the comments on my paper kind of pissed me off in a way I guess. I don't think that I'm cut out to stay in the film program and I think I might just change majors before I'm forced to. This really fucking blows it does. Here is the comment I received about my paper

Comments

[packtnredy8466]

dude, that's not *so* bad. your prof is in need of some tact, but s/he's otherwise saying you're bright, just lacking polish. we can work on that. even higher order concerns (grammar and organization) can be fixed without too much of a hassle. nobody's thoughts come out all clear and organized; the trick is to get them out however you can, then worry about where they go and how they sound. that's what copy and paste are for. :)

if film is where you want to be and you're willing to work at it, i can try to help you--critical analysis and writing happen to be my areas of expertise.