there it goes

[cutecrazyice]

I'm new to this, so I really do appreciate honest opinions. Heh. I hope this is okay enough, for a first monthly-contest try. It's pretty rough. :)

Week 1 entry for October: Brigit's Flame
Prompt: Story starts with the sentence "There it goes."

Comments

[cedarwolfsinger]

This is so very sad. Well written, well done. Good luck.

[cutecrazyice]

Thank you. :)

[karenina143]

Pretty!

[cutecrazyice]

Thanks! :)

[kitkatmalo]

I enjoyed the fairy-like quality of this one. Poor child.

[cutecrazyice]

Thanks, Kat! :)

[bea_tify]

Wow. This is very powerful. I love how she is so helpless, yet it makes me sad at the same time.

[cutecrazyice]

Thanks! :D