Kakashi's Great Plan - Chapter Three

Nov 21, 2005 21:55

Hokay. I know I broke like five million promises, but this was a really TRICKY chapter and I hit writer's block in the middle of it.

Title: Kakashi's Great Plan
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sasuke/Orochimaru, Sasuke/Naruto

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DAMN YOU! chibi_beta November 22 2005, 05:12:09 UTC
You play these little mind games with me, teasing Naruto like that and I still don't understand what Sasuke is trying to accomplish other than make Naruto feel like SHIT when he realizes what is really going on. If he ever does.....

Oh, GG.....I need the next chapter.....please????

This was good, though, I liked the way you're handling the tough stuff between Sasuke and Naruto, and Your characterization of Pakkun is right on. BOUNCY!!!! If you don't keep up with this, I WILL kill you.

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cutiekittyg November 22 2005, 05:16:28 UTC
I am so glad you're liking it. It is such a relief to know that I can always trust you to give me an honest opinion. ^^

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melian_gamgee November 22 2005, 15:34:17 UTC
aww man! why'd you stop there??
XD it was getting good......

anyways, this chap was muchos hot, but kinda sad though, cos isn't Sasuke just doing Oro-sensei's bidding? And not cos he really wants to fuckloves Naruto from the heart?

sighe. I cannot cannot cannot wait for the next chap soon.

*kisskiss*

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cutiekittyg November 23 2005, 00:36:58 UTC
Lol, I am a wicked little troll aren't I? Oh, there will be some angst up in here! Woot woot!

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makaikitty November 23 2005, 02:57:59 UTC
You're evil for stoping! *whine* I'm loving this fic. Can't wait for more. ^_^

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cutiekittyg November 23 2005, 03:55:10 UTC
*cackles*

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makaikitty December 7 2005, 01:14:54 UTC
Like I said: *evil* ^_^

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fujiappletan November 24 2005, 04:02:46 UTC
So here I was randomly posting for my own sake- when I saw Sasuke/Orochimaru and I started reading. (Okay actually I skimmed to when I saw italics and-)

Write more dearie. Write more with OROSASU. *cackles*

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cutiekittyg November 24 2005, 20:58:14 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you. I will.

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