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cutiekittyg

Chapter Three

Feb 22, 2006 23:33

I hope this chapter is good, I was typing it while caring for Austin who got really sick this week. So I was a little distracted. Tell me what you think.

Title: Springtime
Rating: PG-13 (A first for me)
Summary: Chapter Three- And so the race for Naruto begins... Warning: Too tired to beta

Chapter One

Chapter Two

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Comments 26

ayonoi February 23 2006, 07:47:06 UTC

Shino announcing that he is there to sex Naruto up is quite hilarious, it almost made fall off the chair. I am secretly rooting for Neji if Sasuke does not show up >D 'cause Neji is the sex.

Pretty funny situation. I think in Chapter 2, poor Kakashi feared for Naruto's innocence...which he was hoping to save. Good try sensei, good try XD.

Can't wait to see more.

cutiekittyg February 23 2006, 13:56:19 UTC

lol! Thanks! I am really glad you like it. ^^

justkat2790 February 23 2006, 08:17:58 UTC

^_______^

Oh boy oh boy oh boy!!! This story just got about a thousand times funnier, and it was already hilarious!! Kakashi come back and rescue Naruto! He needs you right now!

Sasuke-kun...where aaaaaaaare youuu???

Can't wait for the next bit!^_^

cutiekittyg February 23 2006, 13:56:45 UTC

*plots micheiviously*

hobbit_nudity February 23 2006, 10:21:17 UTC

hoho! shino wins at life, but poor hinata though!

and oh! the suspense!!!!!! XD

but mmmmm shikanaru is so appealing... (as is nejinaru, sasunaru, kibanaru, even shinonaru *begins to list every male around naruto's age in the series, and then some*)

cutiekittyg February 23 2006, 13:57:24 UTC

mmm... Kiba...

melian_gamgee February 23 2006, 16:31:55 UTC

AHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA XDDDDD
Trust Shino to be the most blunt one of them all XDDD
damn I can't wait for the next chapter! : )

cutiekittyg February 24 2006, 01:41:18 UTC

Yay! I am having a blast writing it so it will be soon!

kakashi_morph February 23 2006, 18:05:46 UTC

“I’m here to take his virginity.” Lol!!! That's the funniest line EVER! I loved it. And I bet Kakashi will have a difficult time saving Naruto - if he manages to do that, at all. Then again, he might even give him a lecture - no, wait. That would be Gai's business.
You should definitely put Gai in this as well.
Good fic, it keeps making me laugh. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

cutiekittyg February 24 2006, 03:23:01 UTC

How funny. I'll take your suggestion for Chapter 4 just for you. ^^ Be expectin' some Gai action.