Some minor grammar mistakes happened (like 4-th paragraph - missing word "I" or miss instead of Miss in 3-rd, here instead of hear in last but one), but who cares, I know you’ll fix it soon... Anyway... I like the idea of turning blood into wine as a prove of godhood and the double-edger sentence "He made me." ]:) BTW: Doesn’t Seras have the blue eyes that turn red only at special occasions? Why the red sight at Omen?
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I like the idea of turning blood into wine as a prove of godhood and the double-edger sentence "He made me." ]:)
BTW: Doesn’t Seras have the blue eyes that turn red only at special occasions? Why the red sight at Omen?
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