Sleep! Sleep beckons but I had to leave a comment first. I mean, really, how could I not? Granted, most of this will probably incoherent because omgsofuckinghot.
And seriously, OMGSOFUCKINGHOT. And not just hot but hot AND peppered with humor which makes it so much fun. This is a completely enjoyable read and I'm loving it so very much. And did I mention hot? Because really. Very hot. The dynamics are so interesting and I can't wait for the GSF. I want to see how Jon fits in with Ryan and Spencer. Oh yes.
Whee! I can't wait for the next part!
P.S. lecherous!William is just . . . too much fun. I'm loving him so much.
Next part soon! I don't know that I'm really capable of not breaking up the narrative with humor; life's just funny, you know? I wish that'd be reflected in more fic, man. That, and the lecherous nature of William Beckett. :D
Okay, so first of all, I had to clamp both hands over my mouth a couple times to keep from shrieking and waking the entire house up.
But really, there is just something about the way you write them, the banter and the snark and just, the way they interact that is so ridiculously perfect.
And the bits with William and his incredible gayness are hilarious. HILARIOUS.
And then the sex. Nngh, you write the most incredible panty-wetting sex I have ever encountered. I don't know how you do it, but you just ramp up the tension and when they finally get together it is so hot and dirty and perfectly them and I could read your sex scenes all day. In fact, hmm... what an idea.
In conclusion, SO GLAD I stayed awake and refreshed my flist that "one more time" before bed. SO SO GLAD.
Ah wow. I can say that you are amazing. and this..this was just unbeliveable hot. I think your an amazing writer. I also think Ryan would look good with tattoo on his hip.
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And seriously, OMGSOFUCKINGHOT. And not just hot but hot AND peppered with humor which makes it so much fun. This is a completely enjoyable read and I'm loving it so very much. And did I mention hot? Because really. Very hot. The dynamics are so interesting and I can't wait for the GSF. I want to see how Jon fits in with Ryan and Spencer. Oh yes.
Whee! I can't wait for the next part!
P.S. lecherous!William is just . . . too much fun. I'm loving him so much.
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Thanks for the feedback! You're sweet.
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Okay, so first of all, I had to clamp both hands over my mouth a couple times to keep from shrieking and waking the entire house up.
But really, there is just something about the way you write them, the banter and the snark and just, the way they interact that is so ridiculously perfect.
And the bits with William and his incredible gayness are hilarious. HILARIOUS.
And then the sex. Nngh, you write the most incredible panty-wetting sex I have ever encountered. I don't know how you do it, but you just ramp up the tension and when they finally get together it is so hot and dirty and perfectly them and I could read your sex scenes all day. In fact, hmm... what an idea.
In conclusion, SO GLAD I stayed awake and refreshed my flist that "one more time" before bed. SO SO GLAD.
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I can say that you are amazing. and this..this was just unbeliveable hot. I think your an amazing writer. I also think Ryan would look good with tattoo on his hip.
I love this I hope for more soon.
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