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cyclogenesis

instead of doing something important like saving the world

Feb 09, 2007 13:04

Final part as promised. I hope everyone's enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. :)

( That's What He Said. Ryan/Brendon/Spencer/Jon. NC-17. 3/3. )

my fic

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imaginaryhorses February 9 2007, 22:45:33 UTC

So I was going to comment on the first chapter and incoherency struck, and I figured, "Man, I'm way late, there's two more chapters on the way and there's already FOUR PAGES OF COMMENTS, I can always write a really good one for chapter 2."

And chapter 2 came around and...well, see above, minus the four pages of comments.

And now. I just have to make one thing clear: I'm not a porn kind of girl. It's not that I mind it, it's just that I like gen and AUs and semi-innocent making out and such, and I even have a tendency to occasionally skim the more explicit bits if the NC-17 stuff shows up in a chaptered fic I'm reading. But this? Maybe I am a porn kind of girl after all, or at least an addictedkitten-porn kind of girl, because I can't remember the last time I enjoyed any fanfic this much.

I mean, I loved how you really get the boys and their dynamic- it's tricky enough to capture two boys' personalities and their relationship, let alone four, and you did it pretty much flawlessly. I don't think there were any moments that made me go "Dude, what ( ... )

bloodygoodgirl February 9 2007, 22:59:04 UTC

EI! Okay so I've been holed up in school since the semester started but took a *sick* day today and have spent it reading this all in one go.

Brendon frowned, taking his hand out of Ryan's half-undone pants. "You know, it's not very gentlemanly to kiss and tell."

"I didn't say anything!" Ryan complained, "Why'd you stop touching me?" HEE! Love the way you wrote everyone and just made of awesome.

ezboard_1 February 9 2007, 23:27:57 UTC

that was really really intensely amazingly hot, porn overload. and funny! poor ryan didn't get to fuck anyone but that's okay, brendon/spencer action totally made up for it. *memories*

cultcyndee February 9 2007, 23:47:07 UTC

Thanks for this story. I enjoyed it sooooo much. <33333

mingsunni February 9 2007, 23:47:17 UTC

Yesssssss!!!! *reads*

mingsunni February 10 2007, 01:29:58 UTC

Sooo hands down the best bit of porn fiction ever to grace the Panic slash community, I'm going to venture to say. For real. I'm all for sequels, you know.