Fic: Like A Game (sequel to That First Inconceivable Touch)

[cyclogenesis]

Title: Like A Game (sequel to That First Inconceivable Touch)
Author: addictedkitten
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Boys are only after one thing, Ryan is. Ryan doesn't know what he's after, but he hopes to find that only one thing one of these days so he can stop looking.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Note: I wrote That First

Comments

[brighton_girl]

Cool to see you writing, even if it's not my OTP.

[cyclogenesis]

Thanks, Beth. <3

[wovenindelibly]

I will say for the record that what I like best about this fic is how your language and phrasing has changed and matured and shifted. It's a noticeable difference, which lends credence to Ryan's maturation. Still my favorite, darlin'. <3

[cyclogenesis]

<333 I never can tell so much with stuff like that, so I'm glad it worked. A multitude of hearts, I'm glad we're here now.

[cyclogenesis]

Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thank you for the kind words. :)

[mandy_croyance]

I really liked this. I liked that, years later, it takes them back to almost exactly where they'd been before; how everything and yet nothing has really changed. I also loved that it was "one possible future for the story, rather than a definitive sequel"; I love that there still exists a universe of possibility for these two.

P.S. I agree with wovenindelibly who mentioned the noticeable maturation of your writing and something that really lent itself well to the feeling of this story.

<3

[cyclogenesis]

One of the reasons I didn't do a follow-up until now was that I like the mystery too there, but even now I can still see a bunch of ways it could have gone, and even different happenings between this story and the first.

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, I really appreciate it. <3

[chebonne]

I physically \o/-ed when I saw this and then bit my knuckles the whole way through. I LOVED the first part, and this is just as good. With a happy ending even, and I can get behind that. Thank you so much for this!

[cyclogenesis]

Oh man, thank you for the sweet comment! I'm kind of a sucker for a happy ending, even if it takes a while to get there. Thanks for reading. :)