Fic: Fevered (One Direction, Niall/Zayn + OT5, Explicit, 7k)

[cyclogenesis]

Here is a story! Listen I know I keep saying that but it's because I keep writing stories, that's why. You're going to have to live with that. This one was helped along by the noble efforts of lookingatstars, who rolled with me line by line through the first third of it, Kiersten and Shanicka who kindly looked it over at four o'clock in the morning lol my life,

Comments

[oddishly]

Ahhhhhh this gives me so much joy. You are the best, please write these boys forever. omg, the everything that was onstage. The everything in the dressing room. The everything in the shower. THE EVERYTHING.

Also:

“Just so everyone knows,” Harry says, “if they get naked, I am going to jerk off.”

“I’ll help,” says Louis.

*beams at you* ♥ ♥ ♥

[oanja]

Hot and funny, the best combo there is imo. <3

[wordgasmic]

I don't even have words right now. Your story has left me a helpless ball of sexual frustration curled up on the floor sobbing. Just. Niall.

[xcarex]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. You just made my weekend. The boyfriend just turned to me while I was midway through the fucking and asked "How's your internet" and my only response was a weak, half-whispered "very good" because I could not stop reading this gloriousness long enough to pay him any attention whatsoever.

Why can't all 1D smut involve everybody else watching whoever is getting blown/boned/etc? I just feel like there are so many missed opportunities.

Also, poor Liam.

[hungerpunch]

ahhhhhh hey hello hi i've been following the progress of this over at your tumblr for a week or so and i can't even tell you how big i smiled when i realized it'd been finished and posted. this was the BEST WAY to start my day :DD i love the way you write these boys, their characterizations feel so real and three-dimensional and perfect. what am i saying? i dunno hold on let me scrape my jaw off the floor. okay. so yes basically this was super hot and v successful and you have a remarkable way with words!! and even though the aim of this was to be mostly filthy (i think?) it was also quite funny (liammmm!) with the right amount of sass and it had sweet and tender spots and i just loved it. /coos. ♥