Fic: The Dresden Files: Data Management

Jan 10, 2010 11:12

Written for fanfic50.

Title: Data Management
Fandom: The Dresden Files (tv-verse)
Characters: Bob, young Harry
Prompt: 7. Abnormal
Word Count: 1,285
Rating: G
Summary: Harry has his first encounter with the wave of the future.
Disclaimer: The Dresden Files do not belong to me. Just passing through.
Table: Here There be Ghosts

Data Management )

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dyanarosejill January 10 2010, 17:49:28 UTC
Principal Feany? ^_^

As always, I like your Harry and Bob fics.
I like how they have a routine established. Harry is late. Bob scolds him. Harry says why he is late.

Poor Harry, not knowing that he blows stuff up by merely existing around electronics.
I liked your little note about the teacher with tears.

But very nice ending with Bob already figuring out how to deflect Justin's anger off of Harry. I can see him doing that quite a bit.

And great last line :)

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cyloran January 11 2010, 02:54:53 UTC
I like how they have a routine established. Harry is late. Bob scolds him. Harry says why he is late.

Thank you! There's really only so many ways one can write this particular scene, which you absolutely know has played out many times over the years as Harry grows from boy.

I liked your little note about the teacher with tears.

If someone blew up my brand spankin' new computer equipment, I'd cry too. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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quickyfant January 10 2010, 17:57:39 UTC
With the title data management I was thinking about the mess Harry always has in his office/apartment and the nagging Bob must subject him to because of this. But this shows how the poor man has no other choice, he cant very well file cases in a computer!!! :)

I love the 4:04, because it reminds of another of your stories where you show how time has taken a new meaning for Bob with Harry, and I just love that idea, that Harry means a break in Bobs eternal punishment...

The whole computer lab fizzling and exploding, poor Harry, but very funny picture for the reader! And I like it how you insert that ominous bits into the humor, with what could really mean if Harry did that on purpose and his 'Uncle Justin would kill me' but Bob knowing better! For me that always hugs an angst bunny its very nice! Also the reminder that being Bob under Justin must have been very nasty (Bob knew Morningway and his moods exceedingly well. If fault lay with anyone, it was with himself for having overlooked such an important aspect of Harry's magical ( ... )

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cyloran January 11 2010, 02:57:18 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and for the lovely comments!

And congratulations! You win brownie points for picking up my obscure "404" computer in joke. :D

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day221b January 11 2010, 14:52:35 UTC
Aww! Poor kid. I can just imagine how traumatizing that would be. And with Harry's inclination to place everything, blame and all on his own shoulders? And how sweet of Bob to take the brunt of Justin's wrath, the care and concern shines through. Let's hope he can talk his way out of most of the punishment to come.

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