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cyloran

Ficlet: The Dresden Files: Critical Eye

Sep 12, 2010 10:56

Written for fanfic50 and cross posted to dresdenfic.

Title: Critical Eye
Fandom: The Dresden Files (tv-verse)
Characters: Bob, Harry
Prompt: 37. Beam
Word Count: 484
Rating: PG
Summary: Home improvement, Dresden edition.
Disclaimer: The Dresden Files do not belong to me. Just passing through.
Table: Here There be Ghosts

( Critical Eye )

dresden fic, fanfic50

Comments 15

gehayi September 12 2010, 15:27:30 UTC

*laughs* Oh, I can so picture this happening!

cyloran September 15 2010, 12:57:45 UTC

:) I'm glad you liked it.

ja_bucc September 12 2010, 16:26:46 UTC

Harry’s eyes widened slightly as he looked at the glyph in question. "You’re not serious."

"No, of course not. Your neighbors wouldn’t give a damn if the building crushed you. They will, however, disapprove of suddenly having their homes drop to the ground floor. The landlord will surely increase their rent for the advantage."

This and the "Green isn't your color" are my favorite lines, but all of it is perfect Bob/Harry banter. *laugh* I love it!

cyloran September 15 2010, 12:59:06 UTC

Thank you. :D I love it when the "boys" start carrying on a conversation and I have to rush in with pen/paper to try and catch up.

zenkitty_714 September 12 2010, 19:14:42 UTC

Some things, Bob is always serious about. Like, the chance to screw with Harry's head.

cyloran September 15 2010, 13:00:00 UTC

Why, of course he does. Screwing with Harry's head is one of the few enjoyments Bob has left in his existence.

kiffie September 13 2010, 01:34:56 UTC

*cackles!*

Together, they fight crime. X3

cyloran September 15 2010, 13:00:22 UTC

LOL! Amazing, but true. :D

quickyfant September 13 2010, 07:24:16 UTC

Heee a Harry and Bob story!!! Totally made my day!! :D

"Your anal, painstaking, tedious way."

Favorite line!!! :D I love their talks! You write them so well, thanks! :) What I love about this is how you know both are aware of the exaggeration, because Harry knows if it really would be dangerous Bob would never say "Since I am no longer needed, I will retire to my skull and wait for the earth shattering kaboom."!!! Its just their repertoire and they know it!!! :)

cyloran September 15 2010, 13:02:34 UTC

you know both are aware of the exaggeration, because Harry knows if it really would be dangerous Bob would never say "Since I am no longer needed, I will retire to my skull and wait for the earth shattering kaboom."!!!

Absolutely. There's no way Bob is going to let any harm come to Harry, or visa versa. Then again, there's rarely a time when they'd actually admit that out loud to each other ... hence the verbal sparring.

quickyfant September 16 2010, 02:00:17 UTC

The verbal sparring here is perfect! :)

I had a mini panic attack when I saw this is the story 49 of 50 on your prompt table, I have conflicting feelings: of always wanting more of your stories, but afraid that you stop when the table is finished, but then I remembered you have already chosen another! Thank you so much for that! :)