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[inevitablefict]

That was just fabulous! Thank you so much for taking part, and look for more challeneges soon.

Your friendly neighbourhood mod.

[czechangel]

This was actually lot of fun and I plan on doing more challenges. And thank you for the review.

[smearedink]

Dang but that was haunting. I wish there was another word for it so I didn't sound so cheesy, but really, "haunting" is the only one that fits.

Amazing, basically.

[czechangel]

That's not cheesey at all. It's a huge compliment. I was going for an unsettling effect. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[vascopyjama]

that was EXCELLENT.

i love OC fics with something a bit unnatural or interesting in them, like this. I love how evil!Marissa is the embodiment of Ryan's self-doubt, and I love how you wrote her decay until "she looks just like she did on the day she died". I don't know why that line touched me in particular. Maybe it's 'cause Marissa is a such a dead presence on the show :| :D.

I was really impressed with the pacing, especially for a short fic. It's one of those stories where you feel like you've read more just because of the way the author writes it, so good work also in that regard.

//"You two are too obvious. I can’t believe I never saw it before."//

Come on Josh! Even dead!Marissa knows it!

[czechangel]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked dead!Marissa's decay and got that it's all about Ryan's state of mind.

O.C. fics with an unnatural element to them are my favorites too. :)

[flexible_k]

That was really well done, after the season finale I was expecting to see a flood of fics dealing with this subject matter, but they have been few and far between and this is definitely among one of the better fics in the fandom.

I loved your word choices. It added a chill to the overall mood of the story and got Ryan's voice perfectly. But most of all I loved the melancholy ending

Ryan stands there as he watches Seth walk away.

And he doesn’t say a word.

Poor little broken Ryan, who wants Seth in his heart, but can't get Marrissa out of his head. Great fic!

[czechangel]

Yeah, I expected a lot more fics dealing with it too. I guess most slashers thought, "ding dong the witch is dead" , and just left at that.

Poor little broken Ryan, who wants Seth in his heart, but can't get Marrissa out of his head.

I couldn't better myself. Reviews like this totally make my day.

[dogsbody01]

How come I could actually see Marissa's spirit, hanging around Ryan and terrorizing him for being alive?Good story by the way.

[czechangel]

Because she's a self asorbed skank. Just kidding (only a little bit). :)

This ghost!Marissa is really just a figment of Ryan's imagination. All the things she says to him is really how he feels. I'm really glad you liked the story.

[dogsbody01]

Your welcome.