life is beautiful

[d1loui]

Title: Life is Beautiful 
Written by: d1Loui
Fandom: Hetalia
Genre: general 
Rating: K
Warning: A not really thought out plot; grammatical errors
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Comments

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[wayward_and_me]

Let me just say that you beat me to a jeepney fic. I'd been planning to do it for weeks, though I haven't had the time; I'm glad it was written anyway, and by a writer with so much potential, no less.

I love how the little stories were so true to life; every stranger has his or her own story, but more often than not, one would never take the time to look properly.

That's what Juan is for, is he not? He knows you, and you know him. That's the beauty of it.

My only concerns here are a awkward wording, and a few grammatical and typographical errors. It may distract at times, but it doesn't truly effect the way the story goes.

Welcome to hetalia_ph. I wish you a lovely stay.

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[d1loui]

Ah yes, grammar has always one of been my weakest points, even though I really like to write, and the dictionary has never been my friend as well. =w=b

I'm sure this comm has enough room for two jeepney fics. Actually, the first few parts of this was written a long time ago (everything else was just rushed a few hours ago) and I kind of forgot what the original idea was supposed to be. :)

I'm glad you liked it and thank you for thinking I have potential. >///<

Thank you very much for taking some time to read this and I'm sure I'll have a very lovely stay here. :)

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[pyrolynx]

Hello~
That was really touching. It makes me want to go out and ride a jeepney to anywhere just for the sake of it. I thought it would have a sad ending, but you managed to give each of the passengers happiness. It really gives you hope for the future of our nation.
If you want, I could beta your stories before you post them? I have plenty of free time, love to write myself (though I'm usually too embarrassed to post them :P maybe someday...) and would love to help you improve such splendid works ^.^ I've been living in the UK for more than five years now, so I'm quite confident in my English.

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[d1loui]

Yes, even with all the hardships our people face, we can still find something to smile about.
And I wouldn't mind having you as a beta! ^^ I could probably learn from you. My grammar seriously needs help. >.>
Thank you very much for the kind offer, and for reading! ^^

[vivalalixi]

aww that was a REALLY nice slice of life fic :)
i full on expected it to be sad and angsty. wish my day would be as happy as your fic tomorrow.

this is the first jeepney fic, we have an mrt/lrt, idk what u guys call it there, fic tho <3

[d1loui]

Wah... it's... it's... it's you! I love your works! ^^
so happy you liked it. :)and I hope your day is just as happy, or happier. :)
I didn't think I'd be the first jeepney fic actually... ^^
Thank you for reading. :)