Get your fat, lazy ass out of that rack, Roslin . . .

[d_generate_girl]

Argh. WRITING HARD. So I stole this progress-tracking from my co-author carla_scribbles, so maybe it'll kick my ass into doing some actual work.

Title: "Right Where It's Severed"
Fandom: BSG
Known Unofficially As: Saul/Kara Knife!porn, co-written with Carla.
Number of words committed: 130 (on my part).
Reason for stopping: Collectively brain-dead.
Favorite line:

Comments

[carla_scribbles]

You want to know a secret? You picked the one line I was really not happy with -- I am not at all sure it flows right, but it was getting too early to keep fiddling with it. (I liked the first bit of mine and the one I quoted, but it's good to know what works for other people.)

And the Butlers thing sounds terribly interesting, dear.

[d_generate_girl]

Really? I liked that line, mainly because it brings it all back into sharp focus, like what the HELL is she doing letting Saul frak around with that knife if she spent the last six months using it to kill Leoben?

Argh. Stupid Butlers. Stupid noble Dom and stupid screwup Juliet. I love them to death, but they're driving me insane.